What I love about creativity in writing, there's no hard rules! :)

Would love to know what you guys think!

The gateway flickered, then collapsed, leaving silence.
Her face lingered in my mind, a ghost of betrayal.

I walked away, grinning in the end, my smile a fragile shield against the darkness that still whispered her name.

“You traded me for him?” I roared, rage drowning fear.
I went completely cold, but I walked right up to the devil and smashed his head in, his mocking eyes shattering under my fury.

“And who would that be?” I asked.
She replied with a sinister grin and looked over at the devil, whose laughter shook the ground.

Her words sliced deeper than any blade.
I saw our promises crumble, her cruel smirk burning my soul.

A the figure appeared from behind the king devil.

It was the childhood sweetheart I had long ago.
Her eyes, once warm, now gleamed with malice.
She said to me, “I did not leave because I stopped loving you; I just found someone better.”

The gateway pulsed like a wound, its edges dripping blood.
Creatures with jagged teeth and hollow eyes writhed in a sea of ash, their screams clawing at my sanity.

Then the gateway opened, and the creatures moved aside. The devil appeared and whispered her name.

When my childhood sweetheart vanished without a word, my heart became a void, and this hellish portal grew where hope once lived.

Its uncontrollable inhabitants were twisting my brain.
They screamed their profanity, but I stood my ground.

New Piece INCOMING!!!!

The gateway to the twisted hell was lodged in my mind, a festering wound from a love lost long ago.

Under the willow tree, decades past, she and I had sworn eternal vows, her laughter brighter than the sun.

To me, I like the idea of being able to compare anything to anything else, its fun for starters, but I find it can really be an eye opener for each of the compared things. Might be just me though.

I was just thinking something similar to that myself, Good to know that others took it in a similar way to me.

And then, Suddenly, they announced it, Silksong, no, no it's something else I see colours I see, I see shoes.

🤡👟

Yes, I think I see clearly now, I'm looking in a mirror.

God Dang It, every Direct XD

returned from a trip that would not let up, a stranglehold that has been lifted, what a crazy little life this is, and then in that moment when I laid down, I realised what its all about...

The End.

suddenly the war is over, everything I was fighting with seems to lessen, a life that was over made a new. & now? well now, I float a premise so foreign its almost alien, but finally I feel normal, built like everyone else,

a tornado of self abuse all the while life passing me by, then sometimes the spark renews the war starts to tilt back in my favour, sometimes I'm winning.

And then it happens, abruptly and succinctly, like a breath of fresh air, she walks into my life,

Now the war has settled in, the fight over me has waged for years at this point, I'm exhausted, I'm done, I can't win this game on my own, I sit there sometimes alone, sometimes in the dark cliche,

It was taken from me but hidden deep within myself, that monster made sure to hide it well, but here it is! Maybe, maybe I can confide in you, maybe I can share it, understand, what I found is, my confidence.

Or philosophical miss-matchings preparing to war for their own existence in a mind of pitfalls.

I found it! I found something, long since thought to be dead within, something I had as a young lad, something I didn't even consider was a part of whats wrong.

As I live, further into this madness I make, it started to feel like a trial, something only I can deal with. A realization, something is sparking inside, now the monster stirs, but it doesn't get to roar this time, is this? is this finally happening? a rumble, the fight? a battle between feelings?

to strive for more, peace, love, acceptance. Maybe someday the monster i've lived with will be slain, maybe drive will conquer procrastination? it's possible, but is it possible for me? Do I have it, have it like I dreamed all those years ago?

destroyed my friendships, tested my families patience & indeed broke my soul. I lurched into an abyss that also made me take the final decision.

But for every monster Ive learned, that their exists a light, something out there, something that drives us to do good,

streak of indecision...

It built itself, it became the monster it is through me, It stained everything I did, knowing that it was destroying me, when this destructive process decided to take over, the days seemed to get dark, it closed in took my best years,

The problem I have, well, it's an issue that has controlled me for a long time, it lingers throughout all I am, almost like it defines me. Only a few small years in my youth while the innocence of that time was prominent inside my mind felt like this issue was not present, this tide of fear, this

All the time, I waste time, by myself, I long for completion, I long for resolution. But what do I give myself? Normally, I give myself a lot of shit in this life, why? Who does it serve, what is it doing for me? A vague thought occurs, but is that thought worth thinking? Who knows? I ask myself.

Ok so this is my first attempt at using my new method to write stuff, It's intentionally small and seems a little whiney to my ears, going for a mysterious kinda vibe though.

So here it is for ya.

Thank you!

Hello, i just opened this account to post my creative writing, hope someone enjoys.