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Such great #revpit #10queries advice for other MG Contemporary writers below from @leahrambadt.bsky.social! MG seems tough right now, so hopefully this is helpful. I've reposted my feedback here as well. [FP/QL8]. :) 😍 #iamquerying

QL8 MG C
Overall structure is good. QL is on the long side though. Premise sounds promising, but there’s a lot of telling and too many details in the summary paras; could pare that down, and bring out the MC’s voice more. Try to cover the broad strokes of MS. #RevPit #10Queries

FP8 MG C
Love the MC’s voice! Great work with balancing MC interiority with chara interactions to start establishing who MC is and the problems they’re facing. Setting is a little vague, could use a little more developing. Interested in reading more. #RevPit #10Queries

QL2 MG C
Love the voice in this one! Very engaging and entertaining, instantly caught my attention. Great work previewing writing style and MC voice. It’s on the long side, so tightening the language and focusing on GMC while still keeping the voice is key. #RevPit #10Queries

FP2 MG C
MC is hilarious, def want to follow them around for an entire story. Love the MC’s voice, the bits of interiority, and how descriptive lang reflects the MC’s POV. Opening seems high energy to reflect MC’s high energy; it’s an effective hook, but would use strategically. #RevPit #10Queries

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Do we get to guess if this is ours? 😍 I'm trying to do the process of elimination now based on who has already sent their feedback! 👩‍💻

Thanks. You gave great feedback and are the ultimate hype-woman editor!

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I'm hoping this one is mine. Not many MG Contemporaries out there in the rev pit, and I've narrowed down to maybe, possibly...this one. 😅

Thank you for the tips, @aealexander.bsky.social <3

🫣 Thank you. I don't see anything.

If we didn't get an email, shall we assume you weren't our editor? ;) I was hoping one of these were mine.

This is amazing! Great job. It must make you feel good in a way to get this feedback and know your gut was correct. <3 Keep going!

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I'm still waiting to see my editor's feedback on my submission, but thank you to all the editors for the great feedback. I'll be spying on my inbox every hour on the hour until then. 😅 #revpit #10queries

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So excited to have been selected for the #10Queries drawing by @reviseresub.bsky.social for my MG contemporary novel I've been querying. I can't wait to review the feedback. 😀
#revpit

Same! 😂

Empowering Children Through Literature with Author Jennifer Nestor Jennifer joins the show, telling us about her new book "Jane's Carnival Adventure".

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So exciting! 😀

RC Plus: Author Jennifer Nestor Tackles resiliency in “Jane’s Carnival Adventure”

I had such a great time chatting with @ranceadamsmedia on @rivercitylivetv this week! 🚌✏️ I can’t wait for children to read Jane’s Carnival Adventure, which teaches perseverance, empathy, kindness, and friendship. 🎡🎠🎢

Good luck, friend! <3

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