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Husband, father, and Project Manager. Also a reformed former Youtuber/Content Creator, who finally admitted that no one was interested. Geek, Nerd, Wanna-be Writer. In that order.

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Wrestling and superhero comics live in the same space:

-People dress up in pretty costumes
-Foes become friends and friends become foes
-Characters might end up being cancelled or killed
-Continuity might be good until someone decides to reboot the whole thing

13.05.2025 10:10 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I lost the plot again. It's been like this for 20yrs with this stry. Since I started posting on Bluesky I've been on a line edit of the original 32k words. I only managed maybe 500 new words before I pooped out a few weeks ago.

#lostit #amwriting (supposed to be anyway) #writer #writingcommunity

25.04.2025 22:34 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

"You're not who they told you that you are. I only hope that I've timed this letter correctly so that you have a chance to fix this."

25.04.2025 00:48 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Just recognize in advance that he's banking on marches so that he can call them "riots" & call them "insurection." He's waiting on a chance to sick the dogs & hoses on us. So he can declare martial law. Watch A24's Civil War film to understand.

01.04.2025 09:56 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

TIL that what I am writing can also be called "Superhero Prose." Novelization of comic book stories.

Taking in already published examples to help understand what works best for these stories as I continue to learn more about the technical aspects of writing a novel in general.

#amwriting #writer

27.03.2025 13:16 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Found some gas in my #writing tank. Can't do 1000 words a day w/a full time job & busy family but I'm in there.

Taking in Rob @inventingreality.bsky.social content has been a great resource to wrap my head around some core #writing concepts that I've never really understood until now.

#amwriting

25.03.2025 15:35 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0
I really don’t have time for this, Lance thought. His surveillance of this gang was now at risk due to this moron’s presence. The men at the picnic table had obviously been aware of the idiot’s presence, judging by their regular glances in his direction as they played cards. It was only a matter of time before they confronted him. 
The problem was, that he needed them blissfully unaware that anyone was on their trail. With that condition compromised, his mission was about to hit a dead end. If they knew someone was watching them, they could hardly be counted on to lead Lance back to his own intended target; their handler.
Ironically, he thought, Mr. Windbreaker here was about to hit a dead end of his own. He watched as the young man now attempted to leave the area by walking directly past the group, making himself an even more convenient target.

I really don’t have time for this, Lance thought. His surveillance of this gang was now at risk due to this moron’s presence. The men at the picnic table had obviously been aware of the idiot’s presence, judging by their regular glances in his direction as they played cards. It was only a matter of time before they confronted him. The problem was, that he needed them blissfully unaware that anyone was on their trail. With that condition compromised, his mission was about to hit a dead end. If they knew someone was watching them, they could hardly be counted on to lead Lance back to his own intended target; their handler. Ironically, he thought, Mr. Windbreaker here was about to hit a dead end of his own. He watched as the young man now attempted to leave the area by walking directly past the group, making himself an even more convenient target.

Of course, if that happened, the gang members’ suspicion might be quelled. If they knew they were being tracked and then believed they had taken out their tracker, that would leave his operation intact, right?
Goddamnit, he thought, chiding himself for even considering allowing this idiot to become a useful idiot by way of becoming a dead idiot in a ditch. Once more he found himself closing his eyes and inhaling a deep, cleansing breath. 
It was the senseless death of someone he loved that had brought him back to so this so called superhero life. No matter how old and bitter he had become, he could not allow his mission to result in another senseless death. Allowing this amateur to get himself killed might further Lance’s agenda, but that was simply an unacceptable outcome.

Of course, if that happened, the gang members’ suspicion might be quelled. If they knew they were being tracked and then believed they had taken out their tracker, that would leave his operation intact, right? Goddamnit, he thought, chiding himself for even considering allowing this idiot to become a useful idiot by way of becoming a dead idiot in a ditch. Once more he found himself closing his eyes and inhaling a deep, cleansing breath. It was the senseless death of someone he loved that had brought him back to so this so called superhero life. No matter how old and bitter he had become, he could not allow his mission to result in another senseless death. Allowing this amateur to get himself killed might further Lance’s agenda, but that was simply an unacceptable outcome.

Well here I go. 1st time sharing my writing. Ever, lol Here's my 1st #WIPSnip from "The Wraith Chronicles: Hero's Burden"

Lance is tracking a gang he suspects will lead to the man he's hunting. An amateur detective has entered the fray & gotten in over his head

#Writer #amwriting #WritingPrompts

24.03.2025 18:52 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Haven't touched my story in like, a week. Feels like I lost the thread again. I managed to kick off the next chapter/scene/phase of this book, but I hit a little wall, got distracted by real life and I'm struggling to get back on the horse again and just write :(

20.03.2025 15:02 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Reached Degobah. He was already dead.

19.03.2025 09:29 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Best Star Trek Crew, Wrong Answers Only

19.03.2025 09:22 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Now that I'm pushing 50 years old, most of those years are fuzzy, you know? I seem to recall the WIT sequels for sure, but I remember a book called Time Trap as well. When I was 12, I found the Watchmen graphic novel and well... things changed, lol

18.03.2025 10:20 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

Without question, A Wrinkle In Time tops the list. First read to me by my 4th grade teacher. It set off a lifelong love of science fiction.

17.03.2025 16:39 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

They're going to show this in her highlight reel when she wins at Wrestlemania

16.03.2025 12:30 β€” πŸ‘ 5    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

We're in for a TV adaptation on May 16th, I'm truly hopeful since Wells herself was heavily involved!

13.03.2025 09:53 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Here's the thing. The entire movie felt like it was a fever dream that Georgiou probably had the very first night she stepped into the Guardian portal. She probably woke up that next morning, shook her head, and said,"Wow, that was weird..."

11.03.2025 09:45 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Man, I was stuck there for SOOOOO long, lol

07.03.2025 18:41 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Dehydration, syncope (fainting), strains and sprains, heart attack, and concussion ( that last one typically at concerts, which is where my current scene takes place.)

07.03.2025 14:48 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Just yesterday I found myself googling "What common injuries to EMTs treat at festivals?"

07.03.2025 14:42 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

It occurs to me that while I'm a lifelong fan of Superheroes, I'm not a fan of actual comic books. While I enjoy seeing the occasional panel posted in my feeds, I have no urge to pick up a book and read it.

For me, the characters and the stories, not the art, compels me.

Novelization is my goal.

05.03.2025 14:36 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

A literal human turd is going to fart all over a podium for an hour, and half the room will applaud thunderously for it.

Yeah, I'm down for some Marvel TV myself!

05.03.2025 02:07 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Many thanks :)

04.03.2025 12:07 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I think what I'm getting is "compartmentalize," which makes sense. Your suggestion to use parenthesis kind of builds on what the other commenters are saying & I think I've been trying to tackle the writing in a strictly "linear" way & it's holding me back.

Thanks again!

04.03.2025 01:58 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Thanks! It took me a bit to fully understand the setting because the story takes place in "early fall" & "outside." It finally occurred to me that this scene takes place close to halloween, which definitely helps set the esthetic, which is what I think you're describing. Thanks again!

04.03.2025 01:49 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Thanks! I have that conversation mapped out already w key points I know both of them will make to each other that will move the story forward

It sounds like you're saying it's ok to write that first and go back to the opening of the chapter later when the inspiration strikes?

04.03.2025 01:36 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

You don't need a social media presence, but you do need to be on my paid social media account to read why, lol

03.03.2025 18:39 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Stuck. I've got the next chapter setting & scene. I know the sequence of events & how they lead to a critical interaction between two of the main characters.

But I can't for the life of me find the opening sentence to even start it.

Help?

#writer #amwriting #writingcommunity #writersblock

03.03.2025 18:29 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 3    πŸ“Œ 0

Not hard to suss out that he'll probably cameo as Randor.

01.03.2025 12:52 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

That's precisely what brought me to Bluesky :)

01.03.2025 02:32 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I've recently picked up a wip I've been messing with for a very long time & I was reminded of other characters in that universe that I always intended to write about too. I read an article this week exploring some prewriting strategies when I got hit w/some inspiration on one of those characters :)

01.03.2025 00:45 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Man, now I want a bloomin' onion.

28.02.2025 16:55 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

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