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Acute care physical therapist by day, aspiring romance writer by night.

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10.10.2025 20:48 — 👍 8    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0
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Find the one who's to DIE for
LAST CHANCE MATCH
Adult crossover dystopian romance

Dear Citizen of Calasca,
Pack your bags! You have been chosen to partake in LAST CHANCE MATCH. Congratulations! Should you choose to accept, you will be given tonight to pack your belongings in a Calascan-approved sized luggage to travel to The Pad. Would you like to appear on our inaugural season of LAST CHANCE MATCH?
(Two buttons underneath: Accept and Reject)

Why accept our invitation?
Participants will have the opportunity to choose their own soulmate, similar to those who lived in the Years Before. Winners will no longer be subjected to extermination at thirty and will have access to: higher education, better jobs and premium healthcare. You may find the following reading material helpful.
THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver
SILVER ELITE by Dani Francis
HEART OF THE SUN by Mia Sheridan
THE COMPOUND by Aisling Rawle

Background picture dark leaves from a fern Find the one who's to DIE for LAST CHANCE MATCH Adult crossover dystopian romance Dear Citizen of Calasca, Pack your bags! You have been chosen to partake in LAST CHANCE MATCH. Congratulations! Should you choose to accept, you will be given tonight to pack your belongings in a Calascan-approved sized luggage to travel to The Pad. Would you like to appear on our inaugural season of LAST CHANCE MATCH? (Two buttons underneath: Accept and Reject) Why accept our invitation? Participants will have the opportunity to choose their own soulmate, similar to those who lived in the Years Before. Winners will no longer be subjected to extermination at thirty and will have access to: higher education, better jobs and premium healthcare. You may find the following reading material helpful. THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver SILVER ELITE by Dani Francis HEART OF THE SUN by Mia Sheridan THE COMPOUND by Aisling Rawle

#litagents Interested in a dystopian romance where LOVE ISLAND meets SQUID GAME and BLACK MIRROR?

What can you expect this season?
- Touch her and die MMC
- Soulhates to soulmates
- Cute robots that help you accessorize
- Head rolling twists

#amquerying #writingcommunity

07.10.2025 15:01 — 👍 7    🔁 4    💬 0    📌 0
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An Agent's Guide To:
LAST CHANCE MATCH
91,000 word Adult crossover dystomance

"Find the one who's to die for."

Dark ferns background An Agent's Guide To: LAST CHANCE MATCH 91,000 word Adult crossover dystomance "Find the one who's to die for."

The Pitch:
Calasca’s government uses science to appoint soulmates, but the 0.6% of the population who don’t receive a match face extermination at thirty. A new reality show, Last Chance Match, sets out to change that and gives the matchless another shot at life. Bitter waitress, Cera accepts the invitation, but is quickly deflated when she’s paired with the cocky and entitled Ryde. The show takes a dark turn when a fellow contestant is killed after being eliminated, forcing Cera and Ryde to fight for their happily ever after—and to make it out alive.

The Pitch: Calasca’s government uses science to appoint soulmates, but the 0.6% of the population who don’t receive a match face extermination at thirty. A new reality show, Last Chance Match, sets out to change that and gives the matchless another shot at life. Bitter waitress, Cera accepts the invitation, but is quickly deflated when she’s paired with the cocky and entitled Ryde. The show takes a dark turn when a fellow contestant is killed after being eliminated, forcing Cera and Ryde to fight for their happily ever after—and to make it out alive.

The comps:

THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver
Both with a killer reality show setting to win freedom

SILVER ELITE by Dani Francis
Both with opposing factions and biased government

HEART OF THE SUN
Both with second chances and dislike to lovers arc

LOVE ISLAND
Love Island inspired setting

SQUID GAME
Games created for a killer time

BLACK MIRROR
Dystopian setting with robot twists

The comps: THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver Both with a killer reality show setting to win freedom SILVER ELITE by Dani Francis Both with opposing factions and biased government HEART OF THE SUN Both with second chances and dislike to lovers arc LOVE ISLAND Love Island inspired setting SQUID GAME Games created for a killer time BLACK MIRROR Dystopian setting with robot twists

The Tropes:

Arrows pointing from a mock cover of LAST CHANCE MATCH book with ferns with the following tropes:
Dystomance
He falls first
Soulhates to Soulmates
Forced proximity
Second chances
Only one bed

The Tropes: Arrows pointing from a mock cover of LAST CHANCE MATCH book with ferns with the following tropes: Dystomance He falls first Soulhates to Soulmates Forced proximity Second chances Only one bed

What can you expect this season of LAST CHANCE MATCH?

🩸 gut wrenching plot twists
🩸 cute robots that help style hair, makeup and clothes
🩸 she hates him, he loves her and there’s only one bed
🩸 man creates bot, bot kills man, bot inherits the earth

#writingcommunity #agentsguide

04.09.2025 15:16 — 👍 32    🔁 13    💬 3    📌 1
Movie poster for LAST CHANCE MATCH.

Palm trees with red overlay and blood splattered. Poster reads: love island meets squid game and black mirror, new adult dystomance, enemies destined to be lovers

Find the one who’s to die for

Movie poster for LAST CHANCE MATCH. Palm trees with red overlay and blood splattered. Poster reads: love island meets squid game and black mirror, new adult dystomance, enemies destined to be lovers Find the one who’s to die for

Dear Citizen of Calasca,

Pack your bags! You’ve been invited LAST CHANCE MATCH, a new reality holovision program where LOVE ISLAND meets SQUID GAME and BLACK MIRROR. We promise you’ll find the one who’s to die for.

#posterpit #w #sf #spf #dys #r #na

16.08.2025 13:09 — 👍 51    🔁 28    💬 1    📌 0
Mermaid with the title JUST ADD WATER / dual pov, open door, workplace romance, forced proximity

Mermaid with the title JUST ADD WATER / dual pov, open door, workplace romance, forced proximity

Sedna is far from amused when Kai joins her in the tank during mermaid shows. But when the two embark across Australia to help another aquarium, she finds the animals she helps aren’t the only ones swimming their way into her heart

#posterpitw #posterpitq (soon) #posterpitA #posterpitR #posterpit

16.08.2025 11:51 — 👍 27    🔁 7    💬 0    📌 0
Movie poster with an ocean theme - clownfish and the words JUST ADD WATER, swimming into inboxes late 2025 
Cynical Sedna is far from amused when cave diver Kai joins her in the tank during mermaid shows but when the two embark across Australia to help another aquarium, she finds the animals she helps aren’t the only ones swimming their way into her heart

Movie poster with an ocean theme - clownfish and the words JUST ADD WATER, swimming into inboxes late 2025 Cynical Sedna is far from amused when cave diver Kai joins her in the tank during mermaid shows but when the two embark across Australia to help another aquarium, she finds the animals she helps aren’t the only ones swimming their way into her heart

JUST ADD WATER // adult romcom with open door spice

🪼 small town
🪼 one camper / one bed
🪼 golden retriever x black cat
🪼 workplace romance
🪼 one-sided rivalry
🪼 forced proximity

Querying in October ❤️

#posterpitw #posterpitq (soon) #posterpitA #posterpitR #posterpit

16.08.2025 10:24 — 👍 36    🔁 13    💬 1    📌 0
A couple embraces in the background, the girl crying into the shoulders of the boy. The title of the project is centered on the page, reading: How to Heal a Broken Heart. Underneath is the tagline: 'The best way to get over someone is to get under someone else... Right?' At the tops of the image is a list of tropes: idiots in love, friends with benefits, and instant attraction. The words coming soon are on the bottom of the image.

A couple embraces in the background, the girl crying into the shoulders of the boy. The title of the project is centered on the page, reading: How to Heal a Broken Heart. Underneath is the tagline: 'The best way to get over someone is to get under someone else... Right?' At the tops of the image is a list of tropes: idiots in love, friends with benefits, and instant attraction. The words coming soon are on the bottom of the image.

A new RomCom for fans of FUNNY STORY and NEXT TO YOU.

Featuring:
💙 Kira Larson as the newly single emotional wreck
💙 Xavier Herrera as the broody neighbor
💙 Lots of shenanigans as the lines between casual hookups, friends, or maybe a bit more start to blur

#PosterPit #PosterPitW #A #R #W

16.08.2025 07:33 — 👍 24    🔁 10    💬 0    📌 0
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BUFFY X MY BEST FRIEND’S EXORCISM

🔮90s horror
🔮18 yo MC Roxy is a closeted lesbian
🔮Found family
🔮Vengeful haunted mannequin
🔮So much witchcraft
🔮Steam powered carousel
🔮Small town America

#QueerPit #A #Q #H #F

15.08.2025 16:14 — 👍 4    🔁 16    💬 2    📌 0
AN AGENTS GUIDE TO 'KISS THE WALL' 97,000 word queer sports romance

THE PITCH: When NASCAR rivals-turned-teammates Grayson Steele and Corey Wilder are forced to road trip the season together, they grow closer than ever thought imaginable and must decide what they want more: being the sole championship winner or being with each other.

THE COMPS: POLE POSITION by Rebecca J. Caffery, ICEBREAKER by Hannah Grace, YURI!! ON ICE

THE TROPES: Enemies to lovers, forced proximity, only one bed.

AN AGENTS GUIDE TO 'KISS THE WALL' 97,000 word queer sports romance THE PITCH: When NASCAR rivals-turned-teammates Grayson Steele and Corey Wilder are forced to road trip the season together, they grow closer than ever thought imaginable and must decide what they want more: being the sole championship winner or being with each other. THE COMPS: POLE POSITION by Rebecca J. Caffery, ICEBREAKER by Hannah Grace, YURI!! ON ICE THE TROPES: Enemies to lovers, forced proximity, only one bed.

ICEBREAKER x POLE POSITION

🏳️‍🌈 Rivals to lovers
🏁 Forced proximity
🏳️‍🌈 Flirting via playlists
🏁 Horny pining

#QueerPit #R #RC #A

15.08.2025 15:48 — 👍 2    🔁 8    💬 3    📌 0
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✨VEILED ENCHANTMENTS✨

All Blake wants is to have the same power as the other teens at Holtsworth Academy. But as a mere hedge witch, she only has two options: stay in the shadows or steal the magic and status she has been denied. Sapphic subplot!

#QueerPit #YA #F

15.08.2025 12:01 — 👍 3    🔁 16    💬 0    📌 0

I finally finished the first draft of How To Heal A Broken Heart!!! Now to take a well-needed step back before diving into edits. #writing #writersky

10.08.2025 00:09 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0
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an #agentsguide to my debut adult romantasy novel SUMMER’S SWORD currently complete at 100,000 words ☀️⚔️

if you love:
-headstrong heroines
-bisexual rep
-political intrigue
-faeries and magic

then this is for you! ✨

#questpit #RF #Q

06.08.2025 19:34 — 👍 22    🔁 7    💬 2    📌 0
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Title Card
Text: An Agent's Guide To: The Daughter and the Nameless Son by Kelton Davis | Adult Fantasy | 100k Words | Querying Now!

Background: A red forest Title Card Text: An Agent's Guide To: The Daughter and the Nameless Son by Kelton Davis | Adult Fantasy | 100k Words | Querying Now!

Background: A red forest
Foreground: Six images surrounding a quote (from clockwise): A sunset, a hammer striking hot metal, a red-red arrow fletching, a red-haired archer, a grizzled old man, a red forest.
Text: As she walked away, freshly divested of every life she'd ever known—Crown Daughter, ranger, loyal servant to the demesne—she realized that, where she expected to find fear and despair, she found only a rapidly strengthening resolve.
She'd already lost everything.
All she could do was win it back.

Background: A red forest Foreground: Six images surrounding a quote (from clockwise): A sunset, a hammer striking hot metal, a red-red arrow fletching, a red-haired archer, a grizzled old man, a red forest. Text: As she walked away, freshly divested of every life she'd ever known—Crown Daughter, ranger, loyal servant to the demesne—she realized that, where she expected to find fear and despair, she found only a rapidly strengthening resolve. She'd already lost everything. All she could do was win it back.

Background: A red forest
Title: Comps
Images: Covers of GODKILLER by Hannah Kaner, THE JUSTICE OF KINGS by Richard Swan, and THE BONE SHARD DAUGHTER by Andrew Stewart. Arrows connect similarities between comps.
Text: 
From GODKILLER: Cross-Country Quest to Forbidden Land, Surrogate Parenthood (shared with THE JUSTICE OF KINGS)
From BONE SHARD DAUGHTER: Disgraced Heir, Strong FMC (shared with both others)

Background: A red forest Title: Comps Images: Covers of GODKILLER by Hannah Kaner, THE JUSTICE OF KINGS by Richard Swan, and THE BONE SHARD DAUGHTER by Andrew Stewart. Arrows connect similarities between comps. Text: From GODKILLER: Cross-Country Quest to Forbidden Land, Surrogate Parenthood (shared with THE JUSTICE OF KINGS) From BONE SHARD DAUGHTER: Disgraced Heir, Strong FMC (shared with both others)

Background: A red forest
Title: Pitch
Text: Niozene has never been good enough. 

As daughter and crown heir to the Mother, a living goddess and ruler of her country, perfection is the only standard she’s ever known. Yet, despite her flawless scholar’s education and a polished career as a ranger, Niozene has failed to convince the Mother to look past her greatest flaw—she lacks the holy power to control the minds of others that ordains her family as living gods with divine right to rule. 

When a shape-changing assassin nearly kills the Mother on Niozene’s watch, she is stripped of her titles and given an ultimatum: return with the assassin’s head, or face excommunication from both her homeland and the afterlife. Desperate, she accepts the task as a final chance to prove herself and show the Mother she deserves a place as her daughter. 

Allowed only the help of Sonsan, a surly tracker and criminal also facing excommunication, Niozene dreads that she may have lost her chance at redemption before she has even left home. But when Sonsan reveals that he shares the same strange shape-changing power as the assassin, Niozene realizes his assignment to accompany her is more than coincidence. As they track the assassin deep into a forbidden land, confronting demons, ancient magic, and the ghosts that haunt their dreams and blood, they must uncover the truth behind their quest—and the buried history neither knew they shared—if they wish to live to see their promised redemption.

Background: A red forest Title: Pitch Text: Niozene has never been good enough. As daughter and crown heir to the Mother, a living goddess and ruler of her country, perfection is the only standard she’s ever known. Yet, despite her flawless scholar’s education and a polished career as a ranger, Niozene has failed to convince the Mother to look past her greatest flaw—she lacks the holy power to control the minds of others that ordains her family as living gods with divine right to rule. When a shape-changing assassin nearly kills the Mother on Niozene’s watch, she is stripped of her titles and given an ultimatum: return with the assassin’s head, or face excommunication from both her homeland and the afterlife. Desperate, she accepts the task as a final chance to prove herself and show the Mother she deserves a place as her daughter. Allowed only the help of Sonsan, a surly tracker and criminal also facing excommunication, Niozene dreads that she may have lost her chance at redemption before she has even left home. But when Sonsan reveals that he shares the same strange shape-changing power as the assassin, Niozene realizes his assignment to accompany her is more than coincidence. As they track the assassin deep into a forbidden land, confronting demons, ancient magic, and the ghosts that haunt their dreams and blood, they must uncover the truth behind their quest—and the buried history neither knew they shared—if they wish to live to see their promised redemption.

GODKILLER X BONE SHARD DAUGHTER

A desperate heir. A disgraced warrior. A deadly assassin.

🏹 Strong FMC
🏹 Rich Worldbuilding
🏹 Hunt for Redemption
🏹 Cyclical Trauma
🏹 Found Family

Currently Querying!

#Q #A #F #QuestPit

06.08.2025 04:00 — 👍 81    🔁 40    💬 4    📌 0
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Wave hello to your inner mermaid

Catching feelings is the last thing on the mind of Sedna, a marine biologist who also happens to be the town’s professional mermaid. Things change when Kai joins her on a road trip to the other side of Australia.

#QuestPit #W ( #Q in Oct) #A #R

06.08.2025 07:24 — 👍 28    🔁 10    💬 1    📌 0
Post image n a school full of witches, Blake is the only one with no magic at all. She can assist but not participate. Observe but not engage. That is, until the Grandwitch arrives at the academy with a powerful necklace in tow. If Blake wants to escape her nameless fate and make her mark on the world, stealing it may be her only option.

n a school full of witches, Blake is the only one with no magic at all. She can assist but not participate. Observe but not engage. That is, until the Grandwitch arrives at the academy with a powerful necklace in tow. If Blake wants to escape her nameless fate and make her mark on the world, stealing it may be her only option.

Tropes and Comps:

Dark academia
magical academy
sapphic enemies to lobers
grumpy x grumpy
hidden family secrets
witches
lost gods

Tropes and Comps: Dark academia magical academy sapphic enemies to lobers grumpy x grumpy hidden family secrets witches lost gods

As she pushes swathes of long black hair behind her ears 
and rolls up the sleeves of her turtleneck to the elbows, 
I wait for her charcoal eyes to finally latch onto me, like a crocodile spying its next meal across the surface of the water.

But they never do.

She ignores me entirely, fixing her gaze instead on the skull between my hands. I can’t extinguish the flame of indignation inside me. In a more forgiving world, we would be equals. Rivals. But as things stand, I’m no more to her than the pile of dust on Eram’s desk.

As she pushes swathes of long black hair behind her ears and rolls up the sleeves of her turtleneck to the elbows, I wait for her charcoal eyes to finally latch onto me, like a crocodile spying its next meal across the surface of the water. But they never do. She ignores me entirely, fixing her gaze instead on the skull between my hands. I can’t extinguish the flame of indignation inside me. In a more forgiving world, we would be equals. Rivals. But as things stand, I’m no more to her than the pile of dust on Eram’s desk.

VEILED ENCHANTMENTS - 80K YA FANTASY
✨current agent interest

All Blake wants is to have the same power as the other teens at Holtsworth Academy. But as a mere hedge witch, she only has two options: stay in the shadows or steal the magic she has been denied.

#QuestPit #Q #YA #F

06.08.2025 05:30 — 👍 53    🔁 20    💬 1    📌 0
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An Agent's Guide To:
LAST CHANCE MATCH
New Adult Dystopian Romance

"Find the one who's to die for."

Dark ferns background An Agent's Guide To: LAST CHANCE MATCH New Adult Dystopian Romance "Find the one who's to die for."

The Pitch:
Calasca’s government uses science to appoint soulmates, but the 0.6% of the population who don’t receive a match face extermination at thirty. A new reality show, Last Chance Match, sets out to change that and gives the matchless another shot at life. Downtrodden waitress, Cera accepts the invitation, but is quickly deflated when she’s paired with the cocky and entitled Ryde. The show takes a dark turn when a fellow contestant is killed after being eliminated, forcing Cera and Ryde to fight for their happily ever after—and to make it out alive.

The Pitch: Calasca’s government uses science to appoint soulmates, but the 0.6% of the population who don’t receive a match face extermination at thirty. A new reality show, Last Chance Match, sets out to change that and gives the matchless another shot at life. Downtrodden waitress, Cera accepts the invitation, but is quickly deflated when she’s paired with the cocky and entitled Ryde. The show takes a dark turn when a fellow contestant is killed after being eliminated, forcing Cera and Ryde to fight for their happily ever after—and to make it out alive.

The comps:

THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver
Both with a killer reality show setting to win freedom

SILVER ELITE by Dani Francis
Both with opposing factions and biased government

HEART OF THE SUN
Both with second chances and dislike to lovers arc

The comps: THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver Both with a killer reality show setting to win freedom SILVER ELITE by Dani Francis Both with opposing factions and biased government HEART OF THE SUN Both with second chances and dislike to lovers arc

The Tropes:

Arrows pointing from a mock cover of LAST CHANCE MATCH book with ferns with the following tropes:
Dystomance
Touch her and die
Dislike to locers
Forced proximity
Second chances
Soulmates

The Tropes: Arrows pointing from a mock cover of LAST CHANCE MATCH book with ferns with the following tropes: Dystomance Touch her and die Dislike to locers Forced proximity Second chances Soulmates

Dear Citizen of Calasca,

Pack your bags! I am happy to extend an invitation for you to join us on LAST CHANCE MATCH, a new reality holovision program where LOVE ISLAND meets SQUID GAME and BLACK MIRROR. We promise you’ll find the one who’s to die for.

#W #R #SF #S #QuestPit

06.08.2025 04:12 — 👍 65    🔁 39    💬 5    📌 0
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Kira and Xavier have two things in common: neither is in a place to start a relationship and they're extremely attracted to each other.

It's only natural that they become friends with benefits.

All too soon, they're torn between following their hearts, or risking everything.

#QuestPit #R #W #A

06.08.2025 10:53 — 👍 35    🔁 15    💬 0    📌 0
New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans.

#BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans. #BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans.

#BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans. #BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans.

#BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans. #BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans.

#BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans. #BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

New Girl meets Gilmore Girls when Leah is sent to live with strangers and work with a grumpy coffee shop owner to prove her work ethic, but as mishaps and banter ensue, tension rises like dough between Leah and Alaric, making her question her future plans.

#BluePit📖 #A #R #Q #Agentguide

13.07.2025 11:27 — 👍 44    🔁 22    💬 5    📌 0
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Sharing my newest wip with a scared heart for #BluePit #A #R #wip
Working on draft 2 while I #amquerying Wild Hearts

I will be sharing more once I hit draft 4 😍

13.07.2025 18:00 — 👍 10    🔁 7    💬 0    📌 0
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Hop in loser, we’re going to South Africa

An agent’s guide to WILD HEARTS

🐆 lots of wildlife
🐆 set at a wildlife conservation in South Africa
🐆 influencer x grumpy worker
🐆 two cheeky meerkats
🐆 rewilding and releasing of cheetahs

#BluePit #q #A #R #amquerying

13.07.2025 17:37 — 👍 19    🔁 12    💬 0    📌 0
Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees
Title Card
Text: An Agent's Guide To: The Daughter and the Nameless Son by Kelton Davis | Adult Fantasy | 100k Words | Querying Now!

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees Title Card Text: An Agent's Guide To: The Daughter and the Nameless Son by Kelton Davis | Adult Fantasy | 100k Words | Querying Now!

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees | Six images surrounding a quote (from clockwise): A sunset, a hammer striking hot metal, a red-haired archer, a grizzled old man, red arrow fletching, a red forest.
Text: "You might be too broken to help me yourself," she said, all pretense of courtesy gone, "but if you're a shadow of the man he said you were, you ought to still know something at least.
"Have you ever heard of an assassin who could change their shape?"

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees | Six images surrounding a quote (from clockwise): A sunset, a hammer striking hot metal, a red-haired archer, a grizzled old man, red arrow fletching, a red forest. Text: "You might be too broken to help me yourself," she said, all pretense of courtesy gone, "but if you're a shadow of the man he said you were, you ought to still know something at least. "Have you ever heard of an assassin who could change their shape?"

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees
Title: Comps
Images: Covers of GODKILLER by Hannah Kaner, THE JUSTICE OF KINGS by Richard Swan, and THE BONE SHARD DAUGHTER by Andrew Stewart. Arrows connect similarities between comps.
Text: 
From GODKILLER: Cross-Country Quest to Forbidden Land, Surrogate Parenthood (shared with THE JUSTICE OF KINGS)
From BONE SHARD DAUGHTER: Disgraced Heir, Strong FMC (shared with both others)

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees Title: Comps Images: Covers of GODKILLER by Hannah Kaner, THE JUSTICE OF KINGS by Richard Swan, and THE BONE SHARD DAUGHTER by Andrew Stewart. Arrows connect similarities between comps. Text: From GODKILLER: Cross-Country Quest to Forbidden Land, Surrogate Parenthood (shared with THE JUSTICE OF KINGS) From BONE SHARD DAUGHTER: Disgraced Heir, Strong FMC (shared with both others)

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees
Title: Pitch
Text: Niozene has never been good enough. 

As daughter and crown heir to the Mother, a living goddess and ruler of her country, perfection is the only standard she’s ever known. Yet, despite her flawless scholar’s education and a polished career as a ranger, Niozene has failed to convince the Mother to look past her greatest flaw—she lacks the holy power to control the minds of others that ordains her family as living gods with divine right to rule. 

When a shape-changing assassin nearly kills the Mother on Niozene’s watch, she is stripped of her titles and given an ultimatum: return with the assassin’s head, or face excommunication from both her homeland and the afterlife. Desperate, she accepts the task as a final chance to prove herself and show the Mother she deserves a place as her daughter. 

Allowed only the help of Sonsan, a surly tracker and criminal also facing excommunication, Niozene dreads that she may have lost her chance at redemption before she has even left home. But when Sonsan reveals that he shares the same strange shape-changing power as the assassin, Niozene realizes his assignment to accompany her is more than coincidence. As they track the assassin deep into a forbidden land, confronting demons, ancient magic, and the ghosts that haunt their dreams and blood, they must uncover the truth behind their quest—and the buried history neither knew they shared—if they wish to live to see their promised redemption.

Background: Mountain monastery surrounded by red trees Title: Pitch Text: Niozene has never been good enough. As daughter and crown heir to the Mother, a living goddess and ruler of her country, perfection is the only standard she’s ever known. Yet, despite her flawless scholar’s education and a polished career as a ranger, Niozene has failed to convince the Mother to look past her greatest flaw—she lacks the holy power to control the minds of others that ordains her family as living gods with divine right to rule. When a shape-changing assassin nearly kills the Mother on Niozene’s watch, she is stripped of her titles and given an ultimatum: return with the assassin’s head, or face excommunication from both her homeland and the afterlife. Desperate, she accepts the task as a final chance to prove herself and show the Mother she deserves a place as her daughter. Allowed only the help of Sonsan, a surly tracker and criminal also facing excommunication, Niozene dreads that she may have lost her chance at redemption before she has even left home. But when Sonsan reveals that he shares the same strange shape-changing power as the assassin, Niozene realizes his assignment to accompany her is more than coincidence. As they track the assassin deep into a forbidden land, confronting demons, ancient magic, and the ghosts that haunt their dreams and blood, they must uncover the truth behind their quest—and the buried history neither knew they shared—if they wish to live to see their promised redemption.

GODKILLER X BONE SHARD DAUGHTER

A desperate heir. A disgraced warrior. A deadly assassin.

🏹 Strong FMC
🏹 Rich Worldbuilding
🏹 Hunt for Redemption
🏹 Cyclical Trauma
🏹 Found Family

#BluePit 📖 #A #Q #AmQuerying

13.07.2025 16:55 — 👍 83    🔁 46    💬 5    📌 0
FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER

✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨

*Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone

#BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER ✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨ *Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone #BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER

✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨

*Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone

#BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER ✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨ *Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone #BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER

✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨

*Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone

#BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER ✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨ *Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone #BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER

✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨

*Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone

#BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER ✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨ *Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone #BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentsGuide

FUNNY STORY x SUMMER ROMANCE + WHEN HARRY MET SALLY x THE WEDDING SINGER

✨Two Broken Hearts. One Pact. A Year to Rewrite Their Story.✨

*Same universe as MS I'm querying, Love, Lies, and Letting Go ( #agentsguide 📌) but works as a standalone

#BluePit #BluePit📖 #WF w/ #R #A #W #AgentGuide

13.07.2025 11:12 — 👍 93    🔁 44    💬 3    📌 3
This image is a book cover design for a novel titled "Happy Death Inc." by B. Van Bodegom. The cover is divided into three distinct horizontal sections:

1. Top Section: Features a cartoonish blue sky with white clouds and a bright sun. At the top, a tagline reads:
"How much would you pay to die with a smile?"
The word "HAPPY" appears in large, playful, hand-drawn-style font, partially overlapping the sky background.


2. Middle Section: A photograph of a deceased man in a suit, lying in a casket. He has an exaggerated smile on his face, almost unnaturally wide and clean, suggesting artificial enhancement or post-mortem alteration. Overlaid on this image is the word "DEATH" in the same large font as the previous word.


3. Bottom Section: A cartoon city skyline in pastel tones, similar in style to the top sky background. The word "INC." is overlaid prominently in the same large font. At the very bottom, in smaller capital letters, it says:
"A Novel by B VAN BODEGOM"



The overall design juxtaposes a bright, cheerful aesthetic with dark subject matter (death), emphasizing irony and possibly satire. The smiling corpse and corporate branding imply a dystopian or darkly comedic tone.

This image is a book cover design for a novel titled "Happy Death Inc." by B. Van Bodegom. The cover is divided into three distinct horizontal sections: 1. Top Section: Features a cartoonish blue sky with white clouds and a bright sun. At the top, a tagline reads: "How much would you pay to die with a smile?" The word "HAPPY" appears in large, playful, hand-drawn-style font, partially overlapping the sky background. 2. Middle Section: A photograph of a deceased man in a suit, lying in a casket. He has an exaggerated smile on his face, almost unnaturally wide and clean, suggesting artificial enhancement or post-mortem alteration. Overlaid on this image is the word "DEATH" in the same large font as the previous word. 3. Bottom Section: A cartoon city skyline in pastel tones, similar in style to the top sky background. The word "INC." is overlaid prominently in the same large font. At the very bottom, in smaller capital letters, it says: "A Novel by B VAN BODEGOM" The overall design juxtaposes a bright, cheerful aesthetic with dark subject matter (death), emphasizing irony and possibly satire. The smiling corpse and corporate branding imply a dystopian or darkly comedic tone.

OFFICE SPACE × THANK YOU FOR SMOKING

Dying with a smile is a luxury for the rich and Wren is the rising top salesman for HAPPY DEATH INC.—until a spiteful coworker and a depressed billionaire force him to rethink his talents and what a “happy ending” means.

#BluePit 📖 #A #D #SpecFic #Hu #W #Dis

13.07.2025 11:06 — 👍 55    🔁 25    💬 0    📌 0
The image shows a horror-comedy novel cover titled "DAD BODIES." The top of the cover reads "THE GAME JUST TOOK A DAD TURN" with "DAD" in a different color. 

The background features a haunted house with multiple towers and illuminated windows against a dark backdrop. At the center is a 20-sided die (D20) used in tabletop role-playing games like Dungeons & Dragons, with visible numbers including 1, 7, 13, and 19. The die is surrounded by red blood splatter effects.

At the bottom of the cover are six men with expressions of terror and shock. One man is wearing a white shirt over his head. These men are the dads referenced in the title.

The image shows a horror-comedy novel cover titled "DAD BODIES." The top of the cover reads "THE GAME JUST TOOK A DAD TURN" with "DAD" in a different color. The background features a haunted house with multiple towers and illuminated windows against a dark backdrop. At the center is a 20-sided die (D20) used in tabletop role-playing games like Dungeons & Dragons, with visible numbers including 1, 7, 13, and 19. The die is surrounded by red blood splatter effects. At the bottom of the cover are six men with expressions of terror and shock. One man is wearing a white shirt over his head. These men are the dads referenced in the title.

CABIN IN THE WOODS × JOHN DIES AT THE END × KNIVES OUT

When their detective friend is murdered during their annual gaming retreat, 5 dads must rely on years of #TTRPG experience—and puns—to solve the crime before they're all killed off like NPCs in a badly written campaign.

#BluePit 📖 #A #H #M #Q

13.07.2025 04:03 — 👍 168    🔁 94    💬 12    📌 1

Forgot to add the #bluepit📖 tag

13.07.2025 10:47 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0
Above view of paradise dock on a beach with words overtop.

Find the one who's to die for

An agent's guide to
LAST CHANCE MATCH
New adult dystopian romance thriller with horror elements

Above view of paradise dock on a beach with words overtop. Find the one who's to die for An agent's guide to LAST CHANCE MATCH New adult dystopian romance thriller with horror elements

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Pitch:
Calasca’s government uses science to appoint soulmates, but the 0.6% of the population who don’t receive a match face extermination at thirty. A new reality show, Last Chance Match, sets out to change that and gives the matchless another shot at life. Down-trotted waitress, Cera accepts the invitation, but is quickly deflated when she’s paired with the cocky and entitled Ryde. The show takes a dark turn when a fellow contestant is killed after being eliminated, forcing Cera and Ryde to fight for their happily ever after—and to make it out alive.

Above view of paradise dock on a beach, blurred, with words overtop. Pitch: Calasca’s government uses science to appoint soulmates, but the 0.6% of the population who don’t receive a match face extermination at thirty. A new reality show, Last Chance Match, sets out to change that and gives the matchless another shot at life. Down-trotted waitress, Cera accepts the invitation, but is quickly deflated when she’s paired with the cocky and entitled Ryde. The show takes a dark turn when a fellow contestant is killed after being eliminated, forcing Cera and Ryde to fight for their happily ever after—and to make it out alive.

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Comps:
THE VILLA by Ruth Kelly - dating show setting, twisted games, desperation to win
HEART OF THE SUN by Mia Sheridan - 'enemies' to lovers, second chances, dystopian love story
THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver - winning = freedom, life or death consequences, strong female protagonist

LOVE ISLAND - Love Island-inspired dating show
SQUID GAME - games created for a killer time
BLACK MIRROR - dystopian future with sci-fi twists

Above view of paradise dock on a beach, blurred, with words overtop. Comps: THE VILLA by Ruth Kelly - dating show setting, twisted games, desperation to win HEART OF THE SUN by Mia Sheridan - 'enemies' to lovers, second chances, dystopian love story THE KILL FACTOR by Ben Oliver - winning = freedom, life or death consequences, strong female protagonist LOVE ISLAND - Love Island-inspired dating show SQUID GAME - games created for a killer time BLACK MIRROR - dystopian future with sci-fi twists

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Snippet:
  The silhouette of a woman approaches us, but her flawless skin is a dead giveaway that it’s a humanoid. The older you get, the easier it is to spot them; their skin is free of blemish, not even a tiny scar indented into their bodies. Their eyes are shiny—too shiny—and their smiles lack depth, character, and warmth. Though the government will never admit it, they’ve started to release more and more of these bots into Calasca to act as companions for the matchless.

 They’re chameleons, taking on whatever persona they need to hook into you. The most unsettling part about them is how predatory they can be, entering the neighborhoods of the low-end and matchless. They even have a slot on their abdomens for payment.

 I shiver when the humanoid’s too-perfect eyes land on me, its bone-chilling grin never faltering. 

 “Contestants,” it says so matter-of-fact, yet there’s a sweetness to it. An eerie kindness I can’t ignore. God, I hate humanoids.

Above view of paradise dock on a beach, blurred, with words overtop. Snippet: The silhouette of a woman approaches us, but her flawless skin is a dead giveaway that it’s a humanoid. The older you get, the easier it is to spot them; their skin is free of blemish, not even a tiny scar indented into their bodies. Their eyes are shiny—too shiny—and their smiles lack depth, character, and warmth. Though the government will never admit it, they’ve started to release more and more of these bots into Calasca to act as companions for the matchless. They’re chameleons, taking on whatever persona they need to hook into you. The most unsettling part about them is how predatory they can be, entering the neighborhoods of the low-end and matchless. They even have a slot on their abdomens for payment. I shiver when the humanoid’s too-perfect eyes land on me, its bone-chilling grin never faltering. “Contestants,” it says so matter-of-fact, yet there’s a sweetness to it. An eerie kindness I can’t ignore. God, I hate humanoids.

Dear Citizen of Calasca,
Pack your bags! I am happy to extend an invitation for you to join us on LAST CHANCE MATCH, a new reality holovision program where LOVE ISLAND meets SQUID GAME and BLACK MIRROR. We can promise you’ll find the one who’s to die for.

#bluepit📖 #bluepit #NA #R #H #SF #SP #W

13.07.2025 04:00 — 👍 72    🔁 51    💬 6    📌 0
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Kira and Xavier have two things in common: neither is in a place to start a relationship and they're extremely attracted to each other.

It's only natural that they become friends with benefits.

But all too soon, they're torn between following their hearts, or risking everything.

#BluePit #R #W #A

13.07.2025 10:10 — 👍 37    🔁 17    💬 2    📌 0
An image of a castle surrounded by forest. VEILED ENCHANTMENTS. YA FANTASY WITH DARK ACADEMIA AND SAPPHIC RIVALS TO LOVERS. COMLPETE AT 80,000 WORDS.

An image of a castle surrounded by forest. VEILED ENCHANTMENTS. YA FANTASY WITH DARK ACADEMIA AND SAPPHIC RIVALS TO LOVERS. COMLPETE AT 80,000 WORDS.

The blurb:

Seventeen-year-old Blake has spent her life studying magic at Holtsworth Academy with the hope of joining the ranks of the Royal Corps, an elite infantry comprised of divine witches descended from the gods. There’s only one problem: Blake isn’t a divine witch at all. 

As niece of the headmistress, she is confined to the role of assistant and silent observer of the extraordinary lessons unfolding around her, her own negligible powers denying her full participation.

A spark of hope arrives when Blake learns that the Grandwitch has brought a secret necklace containing a volatile and immeasurable magic to the academy.  Just as she finds a way to obtain it for herself, the necklace disappears and Blake believes she knows exactly who to blame: Maeve Moram, a powerful student who has always had it in for her.

What begins as a quest to recover the necklace results in Blake unearthing not only the hidden truth of her fellow hedge witches but also a deeper and darker power that she can’t begin to comprehend.

The blurb: Seventeen-year-old Blake has spent her life studying magic at Holtsworth Academy with the hope of joining the ranks of the Royal Corps, an elite infantry comprised of divine witches descended from the gods. There’s only one problem: Blake isn’t a divine witch at all. As niece of the headmistress, she is confined to the role of assistant and silent observer of the extraordinary lessons unfolding around her, her own negligible powers denying her full participation. A spark of hope arrives when Blake learns that the Grandwitch has brought a secret necklace containing a volatile and immeasurable magic to the academy. Just as she finds a way to obtain it for herself, the necklace disappears and Blake believes she knows exactly who to blame: Maeve Moram, a powerful student who has always had it in for her. What begins as a quest to recover the necklace results in Blake unearthing not only the hidden truth of her fellow hedge witches but also a deeper and darker power that she can’t begin to comprehend.

Comp Titles:

Every Exquisite Thing by Laura Steven (sapphic romance, rivals to lovers, generational trauma)

Wisteria by Adalyn Grace (familial relationships, lost deities, gothic-lite)

Comp Titles: Every Exquisite Thing by Laura Steven (sapphic romance, rivals to lovers, generational trauma) Wisteria by Adalyn Grace (familial relationships, lost deities, gothic-lite)

Snippet:

“It all comes so easy to you, and you don’t even deserve it.” I scoff. “Do you think the Corps would have selected you if your mother wasn’t Lady Death? I bet Adrien only sticks around to take the attention away from him being one of the Dregs.”

It can be hard to remember just how far down the gods’ bloodline he is when he’s lording it over me. But there is no forgetting just how close Maeve is to the power of Death herself.

“Where I get my magic from doesn’t matter.” She steps so close that I can feel her breath on my skin. Her eyes are slits, her teeth bared. “All that matters is that I have it – and if people want to make use of it, who are you to say otherwise? Just because you hate how small you are. How weak. You must drown in it.”

Snippet: “It all comes so easy to you, and you don’t even deserve it.” I scoff. “Do you think the Corps would have selected you if your mother wasn’t Lady Death? I bet Adrien only sticks around to take the attention away from him being one of the Dregs.” It can be hard to remember just how far down the gods’ bloodline he is when he’s lording it over me. But there is no forgetting just how close Maeve is to the power of Death herself. “Where I get my magic from doesn’t matter.” She steps so close that I can feel her breath on my skin. Her eyes are slits, her teeth bared. “All that matters is that I have it – and if people want to make use of it, who are you to say otherwise? Just because you hate how small you are. How weak. You must drown in it.”

When provided with the opportunity to steal a necklace containing immeasurable magic, hedge witch Blake Delacroix must decide whether to accept the life society has laid out for her or steal the power she has always been denied.

#bluepit #Q #YA #LGBT #F

13.07.2025 07:18 — 👍 42    🔁 21    💬 2    📌 0

Dang, I was so close. Just need to work dragons into my contemporary romance...

#writers #writingcommunity #writesky

07.07.2025 00:29 — 👍 4    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0
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It’s so surreal. I wrote this! 😍 it’s so nice to have a physical reminder of all the blood, sweat and tears it took to write this whole-ass book. I put so much of myself into it. My experiences, memories and the knowledge I gained while volunteering over the past few years #querying #A #Q #R

24.05.2025 11:28 — 👍 2    🔁 1    💬 0    📌 0

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