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Fredric

@redmountainman1.bsky.social

gamedev / coder / artist / writer half man, half goblin currently writing The Punk and the Goblin, a dystopian fantasy. https://fredric.itch.io/

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this is probably just me being overly defensive of my poor writing. I need to roll up my sleeves and rework this novel line by line.

10.11.2025 11:55 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

got feedback from a writer's group that I need to focus on show vs tell. OK, I know readers expect flashy 'show' nowadays, and I need to improve, but I can't stand stories that overuse it. It's like listening to a song that is nothing but guitar solo. #writing

10.11.2025 11:15 — 👍 2    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

having some friends beta read my book and they've been at it for over a month with no feedback. They don't owe me anything, but I wish they'd have been honest about their availability. #writing

01.11.2025 11:27 — 👍 2    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

thank you to everyone who showed up to protests today.

18.10.2025 20:16 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

Yeah, I also had a lot of trouble with epub formatting when using docs' exporter. It was ignoring my pagebreaks. There's got to be better tools out there.

18.10.2025 12:41 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

That sounds frustrating. What file format and software are you using?

17.10.2025 09:24 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

how do you all pass the time while waiting for beta readers to read your MS? I am working on my cover art, and realizing that maybe I should hire someone, because I can't draw. #writing

16.10.2025 19:09 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

At the moment, no. But maybe in a couple weeks for the next draft.

14.10.2025 22:40 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

got a glowing review of my debut novel's first chapter by a beta reader. she said it was like an adult version of Hilda. best compliment I've received in a long time. #writing

13.10.2025 14:36 — 👍 5    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

Nope, no editor yet!

11.10.2025 18:18 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 2    📌 0

This thing I'm writing is a dystopian fantasy novel. Punks, goblins, police state. My first full-length novel!

11.10.2025 12:20 — 👍 2    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

handed the manuscript for my first book out to a couple of beta readers, people I don't really know. why is this so terrifying? #writing

10.10.2025 16:43 — 👍 4    🔁 0    💬 2    📌 0

Trying to remind myself that creativity comes with practice

04.10.2025 12:57 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

Howdy! I'm Fredric, creator of games, art and stories.

I have practically zero credentials for doing any of this, and I sure as hell didn't ask for permission. But if you want to gape in wonder at the weird stuff I make then you have found the right channel.

03.10.2025 21:36 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0
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a giant demon #painting #art

this is my second time trying to art with random paint and canvas I found at a second hand store. I have no idea what I'm doing, but it's fun. be kind.

last time I posted this it didn't thumbnail properly. weird.

03.10.2025 01:06 — 👍 3    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

Happy 1st day of Halloween!

01.10.2025 12:31 — 👍 2    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

Going through Typst documentation this morning, with the hope of using it to make some great looking docs for my #TTRPG one-shot content. This is way better than LaTeX already!

01.10.2025 12:28 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

Yes, I need so much caffeine to keep up with the script change requests for this Halloween musical!

29.09.2025 08:57 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

back to work on the Halloween musical script this morning! That is, of course, if I can first drink enough coffee to even open the document.

#writing

29.09.2025 08:12 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

Authors, one more time:
📣 ANY use of genai will get you onto my "do not read" list.
Cover art, interior art, character pages, extras, bookmarks, ads, marketing material, website, all of it.
Using it AT ALL means you do not respect or understand the damage that genai has done and actively does.

27.09.2025 21:16 — 👍 752    🔁 299    💬 12    📌 9

I made this with Inkscape, and you can tell. It's very vectory. I need to figure out how to make it less so before publishing the setting. Or maybe I should just hand-draw it from scratch.

28.09.2025 14:47 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0
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map for a weird-western one-shot I wrote - The Sleeping Train.

#rpg #maps #ttrpg #tinyd6

28.09.2025 14:44 — 👍 2    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

Working on my Gunslingers one-shot this morning, running the game tomorrow night for some friends.

The party start with train tickets to a remote destination. Rumors swirl around town about unsolved murders, robberies and even demons on the railways. What plots will they uncover? #oneshot #rpg

26.09.2025 11:40 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

thanks!

25.09.2025 13:17 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

Getting positive feedback from friends and family helped me the most with overcoming fear.

25.09.2025 12:29 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

been busy working with a friend and music teacher the past month writing a Halloween musical.

writing can be such a lonely process, it's great when you having opportunities to collaborate with people from other walks of life.

#writing #WritingCommunity #musicals

25.09.2025 10:21 — 👍 3    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

this is a good idea if you're not using something that lets you go back to earlier versions!

25.09.2025 10:15 — 👍 1    🔁 0    💬 2    📌 0
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started painting a beautiful sunset but wound up with Zoidberg.

first real attempt at painting, what did I do wrong?

#painting #art #drawing #zoidberg

24.09.2025 21:58 — 👍 7    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0

67k words on the 3rd draft of my first novel.

I know that's short for a novel, but I'm still proud of it. It's the perfect size for what I needed to tell. #writing #writingcommunity

22.09.2025 23:05 — 👍 3    🔁 0    💬 1    📌 0

yes, I write bash scripts for compiling my books into epub, Word and google drive outputs. no, I don't care how dorky that is.

19.09.2025 10:55 — 👍 0    🔁 0    💬 0    📌 0