TsukitheWolf (On semi-hiatus for ORV project)

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Professor Han Sooyoung!!! :D 👓
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If Kim Dokja was simply an admirer of muscles, he wouldn't only ever admire men's muscles.

If Kim Dokja was just a fan of swordsmanship, he wouldn't always only ever call Yoo Joonghyuk's swordsmanship beautiful and whatever other flowery words he wants to use.

You feel me?

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We killed 85 schoolgirls. We are not the good guys.

I love when Kim Dokja has self-aware light bulb moments like when he regrets not spending more time having like, actual human conversation between friends with Lee Hyunsung and how he kept pushing him down the to-do list under the excuse of prioritizing scenarios. Good job, king.

#ORVReTL The best part of the "Let's Go Back to Earth, Kim Dokja" scene is not everything else but the fact Kim Dokja says not once, but TWICE that Yoo Joonghyuk is drinking HIS tea! Even while (probably) crying, he's being a petty guy. I love him so much.

#ORV

joongdok

We're all raging

Some things aren't meant to be

I'm about to fucking lose it

Yoo Joonghyuk is so distracted by how bad Kim Dokja's body is that he doesn't even have time to get aroused LOL He wanted to maybe get sexy but it's just not working Alas.

Imagining Yoo Joonghyuk giving Kim Dokja a massage but Kim Dokja in agony the entire time and he whimpers when his bones pop and he has to demand Yoo Joonghyuk stop.
Kim Dokja tries to give Yoo Joonghyuk a massage instead, but the muscles are too hard and it hurts his hands.

#sangsoo follow up: Han Sooyoung and Yoo Sangah are FURIOUS to realize their enemy is their soulmate and they can't do anything about it.

#joongdok Concept: Kim Dokja comes from a world with red strings of fate. They can technically follow their own string to find their matching partner. He finds his in Yoo Joonghyuk.
Yoo Joonghyuk, however, has no fucking idea what this string is. It's not a thing in TWSA.

Okay it is GENUINELY a fuck up that the whole KDJ teasing HSY and YJH over their engagement happened because Kim Dokja is shocked when JHW tells him BUT WE ALREADY KNOWS HE KNOWS THIS. HE LITERALLY HAD A "HSY AND YJH DATING? HELL NO KIMCOM DOESNT ALLOW IT" THOUGHT!! COME ON MAN

But yeah it doesnt do anything important. All it does is give them a Giant Fable they use like 1 time, and it gives them an army that doesnt really do anything for the plot. It doesnt add anything big to the story, doesnt advance any characterization, and is basically filler.

Anyway, I don't like the Kaizenix arc and think its weak, but its not as awful as I expected.

narration strips told by the Kaizenix Archipelago Fable. We needed a HSY POV badly to de-damsel in distress her.

Now to be fair, we DO get a bit of story snippets during the fight with Yuri. But these should've been ADDITIONS to just show how Han Sooyoung struggled. We should've gotten her POV, and then we should've seen either more scenes or see an unbiased outsider POV in the short +

epilogue. And they also very much underutilized Yoo Joonghyuk POV.

Anyway, those are my thoughts on Kaizenix.

POV this arc desperately needed, and then gave us too much Han Sooyoung POV later on in ORV when the story could've REALLY used other POVs. And I'm not being biased here. I think the other characrers are seriously neglected in terms of writing later on, and especially in the

with the meta themes of ORV and how Kim Dokja is purposefully breaking away from the writer's control to write his own story, and that a reader ultimately determines how a story ends once it leaves a writer's hands.
Basically, S&S dropped the ball by denying us a Han Sooyoung +

guidance. So naturally, it makes sense that despite the Giant Fable of Kaizenix having such control, the KimCom Giant Fable can flip it on it's head. That is exactly how it leads to Kim Dokja finding "another option" and disregarding all of his writer's plans. This also tracks +

final choice. Han Sooyoung, the writer, has written the story. Now the Reader, as a Character, needs to complete it, like a final puzzle piece falling into place.
But of course KimCom's story so far has been ABOUT overturning stories and expectations, and not following anyone's +

Ricardo being the only romancable option.
Set those up, explain them in the diary, and THEN have her POV and explanation/narration end, bringing us back to Kim Dokja and Yoo Joonghyuk reading the diary. This will serve as a transition of main characters, and who makes the +

choose to marry one of the male leads (Ricardo or Schweichen). And the third path of Fusion Fantasy would most likely be a metanarrative where Possession and such become part of the fantasy itself.
Then, of course, Yoo Joonghyuk rejects all notion, reducing the option to +

character long before all the players were in their roles. And so, the end result is that HER actions determine the genre. It would be a Fantasy if she decided to rid herself of all political opponents and claim full control of the throne, or it will become a RoFan should she +