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I've been wondering why there's so much bad writing in everyday media and I think I am getting my answer.

Ideally every part of a story should depend on and/or refer to what came before and that's a lot easier to pull off if you know your constraints in advance.

03.12.2025 11:45 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

You should help him with those antlers now that mating season is over.

01.12.2025 23:25 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Instant Ramen is rather counter-intuitive because it looks like regular pasta, but is absolute not.

I learned this because I had a few backup cup noodles of various types at work and when needed they were all rancid.

30.11.2025 05:33 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 7    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

If you have old peanuts or cashews you'll recognize the smell as "rancid".

30.11.2025 05:29 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Yeah, I'd go as far to say the oil process makes them go bad faster than comparable shelf stable foods like granola bars or canned soup.

30.11.2025 05:28 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 4    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Ramen Noodles are flash fried in oil and the oil can go rancid. The embedded palm oil is why the noodles have so many calories.

30.11.2025 05:27 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

What's with all the cranes around the Livingston Ave Bridge?

28.11.2025 21:13 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

At least stop using "For You".

28.11.2025 21:08 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Anything that can be filled in after the fact has no global implications on the story and I am going to say that's bad.

26.11.2025 15:19 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

I just helped with a legal eviction and the process takes 2-3 months.

26.11.2025 07:36 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

I'm literally responding to the part of the OP in the [square brackets].

That's the exact point where lazy writing shows up and ruins the immersion. That [] moment informs so much about the characters and by extension the plot itself.

26.11.2025 07:33 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
This is a photograph of a blue pegasus fursuiter standing outside on the grounds of the Furpocalypse 2025 hotel, just after the fursuit parade, with other fursuiters in the background and a general autumnal look with trees and fallen leaves. He's posing casually with two prop tomahawks balanced on his shoulders, like you just asked him to help with something that would require the use of axes.

This is a photograph of a blue pegasus fursuiter standing outside on the grounds of the Furpocalypse 2025 hotel, just after the fursuit parade, with other fursuiters in the background and a general autumnal look with trees and fallen leaves. He's posing casually with two prop tomahawks balanced on his shoulders, like you just asked him to help with something that would require the use of axes.

Hey there, you needed someone to help chop firewood, right? ๐Ÿชต๐Ÿช“๐Ÿด

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24.11.2025 11:12 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 38    ๐Ÿ” 5    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

This is how plot holes and deus ex machina happen. Good stories are path dependent, if a scene can be plugged in later, it might not actually be important. Additionally, the sunk costs of writing ahead will make the author unlikely to undo something they've put to paper.

23.11.2025 20:54 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Then Furry cons went and actually achieved the goal in a much better way.

23.11.2025 20:43 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 14    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

I preferred this one.

23.11.2025 20:42 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Halloween in January?

22.11.2025 01:28 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

I have a consistent fake birthday for this reason and a couple alternate addresses.

20.11.2025 06:02 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Is Lochinvar taking steroids'?

20.11.2025 00:52 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

I see an interlocking and reduced aspect signals. ๐Ÿคฎ

12.11.2025 22:25 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

He's blinded by your golden mane.

12.11.2025 22:24 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Imagine for one moment that Trump was your head of government and had the same power of arrest for online comments he felt harassed by. Is this really the sort of power you'd want to hand your government?

12.11.2025 01:54 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 3    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

As yes, vague terms like harassment that the state is able to selectively enforce as it chooses.

Why don't you declare some enemies of the people while you're at it.

12.11.2025 01:46 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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Arrests are bad! I know your competitors are fudging their numbers, but you shouldn't be anywhere close to this list.

Involving state power to win arguments online isn't the win you think it is.

12.11.2025 01:41 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Congrats, you're an example of dystopian overreach just as so many writers predicted.

12.11.2025 01:08 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Look into a topic before replying. It's exactly the sort of thoughtcrime crap one would assume was a hyperbolic "what if".

12.11.2025 01:01 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

We don't want to become the UK where 12000 ppl have been arrested for online comments.

11.11.2025 22:41 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

Don't accept gifts from @sockfox.net

09.11.2025 15:35 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 2    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
The game is set in Philabieldia,

The game is set in Philabieldia,

Was reading up on a new Square Enix game and itโ€™s set in the mystical kingdom of what I call the city when Iโ€™m drunk

06.11.2025 23:33 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1432    ๐Ÿ” 159    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 71    ๐Ÿ“Œ 14

Bull Alien

07.11.2025 23:18 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
F and M trains will swap routes between Manhattan and Queens starting in
December 2025
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F and M trains will swap routes between Manhattan and Queens starting in December 2025 We're making this change to improve reliability. Here's what you need to know about how your trip may change. New York City Transit

I canโ€™t believe Zohran is transing the trains already

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07.11.2025 20:29 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 11403    ๐Ÿ” 2109    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 154    ๐Ÿ“Œ 120

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