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Chloe Paige

@chloepaige.bsky.social

πŸ“š Neurospicy speculative, literary and flash fiction writer πŸ† Winner of the Elegant Literature Award & NYC Midnight ✏️ Found here and IG: @chloepaigeauthor

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Nothing like submitting in the last 5 minutes to get the heart pounding

02.03.2026 06:41 β€” πŸ‘ 6    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Oops, she did it again!

27.02.2026 04:22 β€” πŸ‘ 13    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 3    πŸ“Œ 0

Thank you! I'd love to see your name on the longlist next round! πŸ‘€

27.02.2026 03:53 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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An honour to make that sweet, sweet longlist for the inaugural Write-Off πŸŽ‰

Congrats to everyone else who made it πŸ₯‚

@notquitewrite.com

27.02.2026 03:02 β€” πŸ‘ 16    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 1

A killer story! Congrats πŸŽ‰πŸ€©

27.02.2026 01:38 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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Befriended a local ghost in Edinburgh, had a rainy adventure, committed to the bit... @lunapress.bsky.social πŸ‘€πŸ‘»βœ¨οΈπŸ–€

25.02.2026 19:54 β€” πŸ‘ 70    πŸ” 30    πŸ’¬ 5    πŸ“Œ 7

Congrats!!! πŸ₯³ πŸ₯‚

26.02.2026 07:22 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

I placed 2nd with my story, β€œCelebrity Collarbones” πŸŽ‰
Off to the finals this weekend! Congrats to everyone else! πŸŽ‰

26.02.2026 04:33 β€” πŸ‘ 13    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 3    πŸ“Œ 0
$3000 Winner Chloe Paige: Elegant Literature Award For New Writers (Lasting Legacy)
YouTube video by Elegant Literature $3000 Winner Chloe Paige: Elegant Literature Award For New Writers (Lasting Legacy)

I was recently interviewed by Creag at @elegantliterature.bsky.social about my award-winning short story, "To Gut a Fish" 🐟
We do a deep dive into the story, including writing negative character arcs, flawed women, and my fave topic β€” verbs 🀩

If you have an hour to listen to me ramble, click here ⬇️

25.02.2026 10:05 β€” πŸ‘ 12    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0

Niceness is an attitude. The meanest, cruelest people in the world can be nice to others. But they are mostly incapable of being kind.

Kindness is in action. It is found in choices. Donations of time, money, or influence with no regard to reciprocation. Someone can be an asshole, and still be kind.

22.02.2026 21:09 β€” πŸ‘ 288    πŸ” 54    πŸ’¬ 18    πŸ“Œ 4
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Just a reminder that the discounted early bird entry fee for the Not Quite Write Prize for Flash Fiction ends this Saturday!

If you haven’t already signed up for the April comp, you might want to get on that.

We also have a small number of sponsored places available for writers on low income.

22.02.2026 23:40 β€” πŸ‘ 8    πŸ” 2    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 1

incredible how many buckaroos do not realize the universes constantly spilling off of them, all the time, every day. you are the most glorious, beautiful being across a thousand different worlds because every choice you make is a REALITY YOU JUST BUILT, and you can build them with love

19.02.2026 01:45 β€” πŸ‘ 508    πŸ” 143    πŸ’¬ 4    πŸ“Œ 7
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17.02.2026 23:00 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
For your next pass, read your novel paragraph by paragraph,
and in every single paragraph, highlight (again, in a color you
haven’t yet used) the weakest sentence. This will take some
time, and it may not feel great, but I promise it’s worth it!
Once back at the computer, do two things: First, delete all
these weakest sentences. Second, consider if what remains of
the paragraph is strong enough to stand the deletion. Most
often it will be, because the weak stuffβ€”especially the kind
of weak sentence you’ve already rewritten a dozen times but
never got rightβ€”eventually forces the surrounding sentences
to make up for its lack. Wherever you feel something is
awry in your post-deletion prose, write a new sentence into
the deleted one’s place instead of continuing to tinker with the
broken one.
This is a big job, but the outcome can be dramatic. My
novel Appleseed contained about 2,500 paragraphs in its final
form. If it’d had that number in an earlier draft, and if I had
removed the weakest sentence from every paragraph, the
novel would immediately have become a lot more concise, and
what remained would have been of a higher overall quality.
A variation on this exercise is to let yourself cut only the
weakest clause you can find in each paragraph, instead of
the weakest sentence. That’s a less dramatic operation, but it
has a similarly powerful outcome, while also exposing any sen-
tences that are too convoluted or that start early or end late.

For your next pass, read your novel paragraph by paragraph, and in every single paragraph, highlight (again, in a color you haven’t yet used) the weakest sentence. This will take some time, and it may not feel great, but I promise it’s worth it! Once back at the computer, do two things: First, delete all these weakest sentences. Second, consider if what remains of the paragraph is strong enough to stand the deletion. Most often it will be, because the weak stuffβ€”especially the kind of weak sentence you’ve already rewritten a dozen times but never got rightβ€”eventually forces the surrounding sentences to make up for its lack. Wherever you feel something is awry in your post-deletion prose, write a new sentence into the deleted one’s place instead of continuing to tinker with the broken one. This is a big job, but the outcome can be dramatic. My novel Appleseed contained about 2,500 paragraphs in its final form. If it’d had that number in an earlier draft, and if I had removed the weakest sentence from every paragraph, the novel would immediately have become a lot more concise, and what remained would have been of a higher overall quality. A variation on this exercise is to let yourself cut only the weakest clause you can find in each paragraph, instead of the weakest sentence. That’s a less dramatic operation, but it has a similarly powerful outcome, while also exposing any sen- tences that are too convoluted or that start early or end late.

Today I started a "weakest sentences" pass as described in Refuse to Be Done, and it's always amazing how much good this mass culling of a novel's prose does, even late in the game. ("Weakest" here doesn't mean "bad," necessarily, only "not as strong as the rest." Your book gets better so fast!)

14.02.2026 16:43 β€” πŸ‘ 43    πŸ” 3    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 2

I have thought about this story a lot since I first read it on the forum. Stoked to see it’s found a home! Congrats! πŸŽ‰πŸ₯‚

14.02.2026 00:36 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0
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10.02.2026 01:05 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Thank you so much! πŸ₯°

09.02.2026 22:30 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

When you’re out shopping for that special someone this Valentine’s Day, remember flowers wilt and chocolates get stale but rolling library ladders are forever

07.02.2026 11:46 β€” πŸ‘ 290    πŸ” 32    πŸ’¬ 4    πŸ“Œ 3

To celebrate Bookshop.org (US) now selling paperbacks & ebooks from trad & indie authors (& profit sharing w. indie storesπŸ˜‰)...

Authors: drop your book blurb, graphic & bookshop.org link! Affiliate links are welcome.

(If your ebooks via D2D aren't on Bookshop yet, bookmark this 🧡& add them later!)

08.02.2026 13:43 β€” πŸ‘ 278    πŸ” 97    πŸ’¬ 52    πŸ“Œ 4

Always up to celebrate with you! πŸ₯³πŸ₯‚

06.02.2026 11:43 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Might have to keep him!

06.02.2026 08:34 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

in solidarity with the authors on social media who have been getting mocked or harassed for celebrating their accomplishments i would like to announce that i too am the worlds greatest author and i sell a lot of books. thank you

06.02.2026 03:50 β€” πŸ‘ 1210    πŸ” 105    πŸ’¬ 23    πŸ“Œ 5
Two gold cup trophies on a desk next to a pot plant with plaques reading β€œElegant Literature Award. Chloe Paige” and β€œNYC Midnight 500 word Fiction Challenge. Chloe Paige”.

Two gold cup trophies on a desk next to a pot plant with plaques reading β€œElegant Literature Award. Chloe Paige” and β€œNYC Midnight 500 word Fiction Challenge. Chloe Paige”.

My partner went and got trophies custom made for me to celebrate my Elegant Literature and NYC Midnight wins. It’s so motivating having something tangible like this on my desk when I’m writing.
Immensely grateful πŸ₯Ή

06.02.2026 03:46 β€” πŸ‘ 29    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 4    πŸ“Œ 0

My questionable stalker thriller made it through! πŸŽ‰

05.02.2026 04:56 β€” πŸ‘ 6    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0
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05.02.2026 04:55 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

4th for me with my icky stalker thriller! Hoping to keep the momentum going 🀞

05.02.2026 04:54 β€” πŸ‘ 4    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0
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04.02.2026 01:43 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

You got this! Get that novel out into the world! πŸ’ͺ

03.02.2026 15:58 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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A literary agent told me this was rarer than talent (but maybe more important?) On surviving the Writing Games

An excellent read πŸ’―

03.02.2026 08:50 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

I don’t want a future where disabled people are inspirational exceptions.
I want a future where we’re impossible to ignore.

03.02.2026 00:42 β€” πŸ‘ 19    πŸ” 5    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0