Ethan (or papyrus)

you literally have this bro 🙏

feedback appreciated as always :)

Feedback appreciated :)

imagine this being the first paragraph of your Wikipedia article

a lot of people are rightfully terrified of a Trump victory tomorrow. I am too. I wrote this a couple months ago, but right now I really do want to share it in case anyone needs to hear it; we'll be okay.

some people have bad first drafts, and other people have whatever the FUCK I’m rereading right now that I allegedly wrote

Yeah

this one is kinda old but looking back to it hits hard atm. feedback appreciated :)

Poem: “The Turning Room” Counter walls and clockwise floors Move a great machine Grazing knobs of liquid doors Thrown by gravity Spring contraptions, Clown eyes Popping from a God Red swirls Spotlights He and Satan nod I am thrown, Yes, I am, Don’t remember entering Can’t get up, No, I feel Stubby fingers shortening Toes and fingers flat as snow Buried dying criminals Space between my neck and head Growing more so liminal From your purple blanket, To your frigid gut, Worlds alive and all alone You can’t reach out and touch A glass jar This room rocking, reddening Jar halfway on edge Catch it and I’m fumbling No fingers it can touch it soundlessly breaks Circus walls go up Fly to greater beings Flatness infinite And I don’t think of escaping, For there is nothing left.

Feedback is appreciated as always :)

I’m not joking I couldn’t think of a name for my last short story so I made up a random ass word and called it gleef

This one wasn’t meant to be super special. Just some thoughts from someone who’s really inexperienced at poetry lol

it reminds me of revolutionaries in communist countries, dreaming of a utopian future only to be met with the grim reality of human nature

wait this is amazing

A poem I wrote. Feedback is appreciated <3

ok but a ballad of songbirds and snakes was amazing

This is funny but I do hate when people actually argue this. Stories about unrealistic things should still work within the rules of their worlds. Like, if Rick's pinkie toe grew to the size of a bus in the middle of the walking dead, you can't say "well, this is a show about zombies after all"