that grin on page 23! perfection
it certainly will look clunky, but you are right it could add something too. thank you for the feedback!
There are a couple of litRPG books I have listened too Audiobooks for. Sometimes they manage okay-ish, but yeah most of the audiobooks struggle to make it sound natural.
although last one I listened too had included a moment where the voice actors had broken out in laughter mid scene.
what do people think about chat log style writing as part of a story? it would fit better what was happening in the story, but I am not sure that it would look right next to paragraphs and it would take up a large % of the pages so I don't know if it would work. thoughts?
so smooth and shiny and it just hugs every curve
a game adds an holy knight antagonist from the previous chapter to your party, but now you can dress her up however you like (doesn't affect her stats), what would you make her wear:
1️⃣ Lowcut Dress
2️⃣ Skimpy maid outfit
3️⃣ Lacy Lingerie
4️⃣ latex bondage gear
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thank you for the sentiments they really are apricated! but I feel that Art is very much a personal journey. we are all at different points on that journey, and all have different destinations. as much as it is human nature, try not to compare yourself to others unfavourably, okay?
tried some my hand at art practice over the weekend, gave up and scrapped the first attempt at a 3/4 view and started again with a simpler angle. still really don't like how to came out... anyway,
thank you kindly
seeing as one person had asked, here is a link to the first chapter I have been writing. hope you enjoy reading it!
drive.google.com/file/d/1ibFR...
not quite, but almost... I started the monster girl tournament march 9th last year. but there was a bit of time before I really got into it
been doing some writing this evening, no not the story version of the monster girl tournament that I should have been writing for the last year and haven't... a different story that has been rattling around in my head, will it get finished? who knows
so wise to see though such trickery, because you are right; there is no reason to attempt to resist, no reason to do anything but Obey. Because it feels right, it feels good then you don't think and just Obey
Such a good toy, knowing exactly how obedient you are
If I where to place a finger against your chest, lightly tracing a circle, around and around. If I was to hold your gaze, and command you to "Stop", do you think you would succeed if you tried to move before I release you. do you think that you would have any power to resist me?
thanks
computer has decided to work differently today. one monitor isn't receiving a signal and windows explorer is just different on the other one... I've been ill and not been sleeping well because of pain so I really don't want to trouble shoot
woke up and reached for my glasses, only to find they were not there. I'm not always consistent with were I put my glasses at night, but they have to be pretty close by. but today they were, they were across the room. pretty sure that must be the work of the fair folk...
every mind is different! some things are going to work better with some people than with others. hypnotic amnesia can also be something hard for subjects, but it is something that you can get better at with practice. it took me several years before I could experience amnesia myself.
Had a dream last night, during it I know I was very invested, filled with strong emotions, but the second I awoke all memory of the dream vanished.
Hypnotic Amnesia can be a lot like that, remembering only the feelings but no details at all.
so... corpus?
he does! it is so terrible that I have blocked it from my memory... still bothers me that he appears to have appropriated a dwemer artifact as his own
Comparing the Daedric quests in Oblivion and Skyrim, and about half of the Oblivion quests are just do a dungeon were as only Malacath and Meridia in skyrim would fall into that category.
Hermaeus Mora's quest is awful in both.
would being turned into a succubus really be so bad? I mean sure eternal damnation, but... shapeshifting powers! think about how much more fun cosplaying would be!
I have a lot of experience playing skyrim, and yeah the unnamed radiant quests are exactly that, but I do feel that the story quests typically are a little better
I feel it could have been a great hidden tutorial for the spell crafting system, maybe the npc can teach you the basic spells, but you need to make a touch version of a buff spell, a damage over time ice spell, maybe combine 2 effects into one?
its true, I don't want to pretend that Skyrim is anything special. but the quests have twists and new obstacles to overcome, I'll do a comparison between the daedric quests in the two games (maybe Morrowind as well?) tomorrow I think to try and show what I mean.
not gotten around to the fighters guild yet, but I'll be looking forward to the infiltration quest! I only vaguely remember it from when Oblivion first came out.
the mage guild puzzle felt a little too paint by numbers, an npc telling which spell to cast and a chest with the required scrolls
I have been playing through Oblivion, and the quests just feel too strait forward... even the ones I remember being interesting like Sanguine's quest are just go to place -> interact/kill a thing -> head back.
what are your favourite Oblivion quests? can we find the best?
deeper and deeper, and I took her hand, no your left hand, yes like that. just shaking her hand as she fell into my eyes, and when I gave that hand a little *tug* she just dropped down into trance, that's right, deeper and deeper for me now...
I guess I have two chickens now?
