The Post-Mortem: Guest Post by Mark Fisher, Journalist and Theatre Critic
The Pitch That Was Ignored. Until It Was Too Late.
Pitch Fail Club: Guest Post from @markffisher.bsky.social
Mark warm-pitched an editor and shares the full pitch, the feedback, and what he learned.
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The Craft: How to Turn A Half-Baked Idea into a Pitch
Supermarket car parks, huh? Thatβs not a story until you ask why the cashierβs acting like a parking attendant.
New from PFC
βI want to write about...β is not a pitch. Itβs a crumb. No editor sits down for a crumb.
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π On Thursday: A Post Mortem from a national broadsheet theatre critic, and a reply that came too late.
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Pitch Fail Club | Substack
For freelance journalists: We dissect your real rejected story pitches and editor feedback to help you sell more articles. Letβs fail better, together. Click to read Pitch Fail Club, a Substack public...
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4/5 Why did I start this? Because learning to pitch through trial & error alone is brutal. And lonely. Pitch Fail Club is about changing that, together.
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Company in the glorious, miserable art of freelance pitching. Because we've all been there.
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2/5 Welcome to Pitch Fail Club! π My new weekly Substack where we DO talk about it. We dissect real failed pitches & share the actual editor feedback that came with them.
We're here to show you the 'WHY' so you stop pitching into the void.
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1/5 π¨ LAUNCH DAY: Pitch Fail Club is live! π¨
Freelance Journalists: Your freelance pitch gets rejected. Again. No feedback. No explanation. Just a 'Weβll pass on this,' or more likely, silence.
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Freelancers, ever feel like your pitches are loading... and then stalling? π« Coming soon...a new community to help you get past the error messages. Pitch Fail Club is Launching May 29th, 2025 with very special guests. #PitchFailClub #FreelanceJournalism #Pitching #Substack #WritingCommunity
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I didn't realise the Spectator had such a good classical music section!
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Congrats on VAN hitting 400! That 'sexless' verdict on a Daphnis with acrobats is brutal - like describing a banquet as tasteless.
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Hey, I wrote this! So pleased to be making by debut in VAN Magazine. Thanks so much to @mbetteridge.bsky.social for his time last week.
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Image shows a person in an airport watching a plane take off. Text says, Travel, flying and the climate crisis (Exeter). A community event about how we can reimagine travel, and why we must, Thursday 6th March 7pm-8.30pm, University of Exeter or online
We're bringing our event 'Travel, flying and the climate crisis' to Exeter!
Hear from @jamesgyke.bsky.social, @vipulpatel.bsky.social, @sarahfinch.bsky.social & more about campaigning, justice, offsetting, travel...
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councillor james banyard meets the cast of wandering tiger
Great to meet the guys from Wandering Tiger today - Ben, Luke and Charlie - as they prepare for this year's production of Humbug at St Nicholas Priory
Starting with a small @exetercouncil.bsky.social arts grant in 2017, theyβve grown into a key fixture in the regionβs culture.
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Excellent preview piece, Lee!
11.12.2024 08:51 β π 0 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
13/ The pandemic forced Exeter Council to stop accepting cash.
But we donβt have to accept this ongoing exclusion.
π± Greens are calling for:
A full EQIA on cashless payments.
Reinstating cash payments at leisure facilities.
Letβs make services inclusive for all.
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
12/ Going cashless affects young people too.
Ron Delnevo from the Payment Choice Alliance said over 50% of pocket money is given in cash.
Harriet Baldwin MP went to a cashless leisure centre that insisted that customers used a coin for the locker.
Cash wonβt vanish.
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
11/ This issue isnβt just in Exeter.
The Commons Treasury Committee in Westminster is currently discussing access to cash.
@age-uk.bsky.social told the committee it was crucial that people could still access essentials, like council run leisure services.
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10/ Cllr Knott (Labour) argued that handling cash costs twice as much as card payments, and challenged me to suggest which services the council should cut to fund cash-handling costs.
But running a council is not the same as running a pub.
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9/ Labour says only a small number of people are affected by this policy and claims leisure centres have found ways of helping them.
But what about the people who donβt even try to go for a swim because they know they canβt pay in cash?
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8/Cllr Duncan Wood, Labourβs Portfolio Holder for Leisure, said the pandemic forced the council to go cashless, so no EQIA was necessary.
But why havenβt they done one now, years after the initial change?
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
7/ Councils are legally obliged to assess how their policies impact disadvantaged groups.
Last week, I attended the Strategic Scrutiny Committee, and asked Exeterβs Labour-led council why they hadnβt done an Equalities Impact Assessment on going cashless.
This is what they said:
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
6/ Consider victims of financial abuse.
These people rely on cashβoften saved secretlyβto escape their abuser, and to hide their trail.
Using cash can be a matter of life and death.
Cashless council leisure centres exclude these vulnerable people.
We must do better.
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
5/ The people who use cash most are often the most vulnerable.
Older adults, people with disabilities, undocumented migrants, those without bank accounts, and victims of financial abuse.
Excluding cash excludes them from accessing leisure facilities.
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4/ The FCA says 10% of the UK population still rely on cash.
Cash payments in shops have gone up for the second year running.
A Fore Street trader told me she is seeing more customers paying with cash. Why?
The cost of living crisis drives more people to use cash to budget.
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
3/Fast forward to today: vaccines have brought back normal life for most people.
But while workers have returned to their offices, cash hasnβt returned to many council services.
Why not?
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
2/The pandemic changed everything.
Cash became βdirty." Contactless payments were the new normal.
Exeter City Council switched to a cashless system for leisure facilities. St Sidwellβs Point was built with no cash handling facilities at all.
Cashless was the future.
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
councillor james banyard exeter holding a five pound note outside st sidwells point swimming pool
1/ Cashless payments are everywhere.
In Exeter, the Labour council-run leisure centres, like St Sidwellβs Point, donβt accept cash.
Who cares? Most people pay digitally now.
A π§΅ about why the council should accept cash.
09.12.2024 16:42 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 2 π 0
An image of the cleared former bus station site - niw a concrete eyesore - in Exeter City Centre. Imposed on the image are the words: We asked what YOU wanted to see at the former bus station site in Exeter. The results are in... NO to a car park. YES to something special and distinctive.
πOur survey asking local residents for ideas on the former bus station site in #Exeter found no appetite for Labour's temporary car park plan.
π Over 280 responses brought forward many creative ideas for the site.
π₯³ This has prompted the Council to consult on possible alternatives to a car park.
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