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Teacher, lawyer, writer, angler, unapologetic Blue Devil | Co-Director, @UVALaw #LegalWriting Program | Founder, Punctuated Law Designs (http://punctuatedlaw.com) | Writing Coach

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I recently posted about the importance of clarity in legal writing. My thread didnโ€™t get into how to achieve it.

Hereโ€™s one basic, concrete tip: put subjects and their verbs near the start of the sentence and near each other.

The sentence in the block quote below illustrates the point nicely.

04.08.2025 11:58 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 34    ๐Ÿ” 5    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 6    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1
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31.07.2025 15:42 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 34    ๐Ÿ” 27    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 7    ๐Ÿ“Œ 12

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Clarity is the number one priority in legal writing.

26.07.2025 13:08 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 35    ๐Ÿ” 6    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 5    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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UVA Law Is No. 1 in Best Quality of Life, Best Professors, Best Classroom Experience The University of Virginia School of Law reclaimed the top spot in Best Quality of Life and continued to top the list for Best Classroom Experience and Best Professors in The Princeton Reviewโ€™s 2025 l...

#UVALaw reclaimed its No. 1 spot in Best Quality of Life and continues to top the list for Best Professors and Best Classroom Experience in The Princeton Reviewโ€™s annual law school rankings.

23.07.2025 19:13 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 3    ๐Ÿ” 2    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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As U-Va. president leaves, faculty say board failed to protect university University of Virginia faculty senate votes no-confidence in Board of Visitors amid Trump administration scrutiny

โ€œUniversity of Virginia faculty passed a vote of no confidence Friday in the schoolโ€™s governing body, saying it failed to protect against โ€œoutside interferenceโ€ by the Trump administration that led to the eventual resignation of President James E. Ryan.โ€

12.07.2025 14:57 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 18    ๐Ÿ” 4    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

The House #OBBB Bill provided for a $150k cap; the Senate bill raised that to $200k but with a $50k annual cap. That makes sense for medical students but not for law students. Unsurprisingly, the Chair of the relevant Senate Committee was Dr. Bill Cassidy. Oy. www.americanbar.org/advocacy/gov...

04.07.2025 19:46 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 5    ๐Ÿ” 4    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

I am spending my 4th reading up on student loans and #OBBB for the podcast with @mbkplus.bsky.social. Unless I am missing something, law schools will be in serious trouble beginning in 2026-27. Many media outlets are reporting the $200k total cap for professional schools, but the annual cap is $50k

04.07.2025 19:26 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 15    ๐Ÿ” 6    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 2

An even longer, standing ovation after another speaker thanks UVA for their long-time support and, specifically, Jim Ryanโ€™s contributions.

04.07.2025 13:31 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 3    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

The event starts with a reading of the Declarationโ€™s preamble.

Sustained applause after the line decrying โ€œa long train of abuses and usurpations, pursuing invariably the same object [that] evinces a design to reduce them under absolute despotismโ€

Damn right.

04.07.2025 13:28 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 6    ๐Ÿ” 1    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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Honored and proud to be spending Independence Day at the annual Monticello naturalization ceremony, helping to celebrate and welcome more than 70 new fellow Americans.

Itโ€™s always a deeply moving event, but it feels so much more meaningful this year.

04.07.2025 13:07 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 80    ๐Ÿ” 6    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 3    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

- Cityโ€™s outside counselโ€ฆ.doesnโ€™t do that.

- 6/2/25: NIMBYs seek default judgment

- 6/3/25: Cityโ€™s lawyers realize mistake and seek leave to file answer

- 7/1/25: Judge grants default; zoning ordinance is void ab intitio.

infocville.com/2025/07/01/j...

cc @badlawyerpod.bsky.social

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02.07.2025 23:07 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 4    ๐Ÿ” 1    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

Absolute lawyer nightmare fuel here in Charlottesville:

- City adopts new zoning ordinance allowing more density.

- Jan. 2024: NIMBYs sue to block it (obvi)

- Late 2024: NIMBYs file amended complaint; City moves to dismiss.

- 4/30/25: Judge denies MTD; gives City 21 days to file answer

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02.07.2025 23:07 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 6    ๐Ÿ” 4    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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a man with a mustache is making a funny face while wearing a black shirt and a chain around his neck . ALT: a man with a mustache is making a funny face while wearing a black shirt and a chain around his neck .
02.07.2025 23:30 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

- Cityโ€™s outside counselโ€ฆ.doesnโ€™t do that.

- 6/2/25: NIMBYs seek default judgment

- 6/3/25: Cityโ€™s lawyers realize mistake and seek leave to file answer

- 7/1/25: Judge grants default; zoning ordinance is void ab intitio.

infocville.com/2025/07/01/j...

cc @badlawyerpod.bsky.social

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02.07.2025 23:07 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 4    ๐Ÿ” 1    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

Absolute lawyer nightmare fuel here in Charlottesville:

- City adopts new zoning ordinance allowing more density.

- Jan. 2024: NIMBYs sue to block it (obvi)

- Late 2024: NIMBYs file amended complaint; City moves to dismiss.

- 4/30/25: Judge denies MTD; gives City 21 days to file answer

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02.07.2025 23:07 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 6    ๐Ÿ” 4    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

INDIANA JONES AND โ€œREALLY MORE OF A COMMENT THAN A QUESTIONโ€

02.07.2025 21:15 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 58    ๐Ÿ” 7    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

INDIANA JONES AND EXASPERATINGLY EXPLAINING HOW JARED DIAMOND GROSSLY OVERSIMPLIFIED COMPLEX SOCIOLOGICAL, CULTURAL, AND GEOLOGICAL FACTORS AND ELIDED OBVIOUS CRITIQUES

02.07.2025 21:14 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 64    ๐Ÿ” 6    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 2    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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Letters from DOJ reveal threats to U.Va. over admissions policies, Ryanโ€™s leadership โ€œTime is running short, and the Departmentโ€™s patience is wearing thin,โ€ the final letter read

This is a must-read story (including full text of letters from a FOIA request) by the Daily Cavalier about Trump admin's efforts to misuse federal antidiscrimination law in support of its ideological agenda against DEI at UVA. Kudos to the student journalists! www.cavalierdaily.com/article/2025...

02.07.2025 18:31 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 700    ๐Ÿ” 293    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 16    ๐Ÿ“Œ 22
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New article alert! "The 'First-Year Law Student' in Legal Rhetoric will be published in Legal Communication & Rhetoric: JALWD. The article explores, categorizes, and critiques references to first-year law students in legal rhetoric and discourse.

papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers....

02.07.2025 20:15 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 12    ๐Ÿ” 3    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 2    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

Update: This meeting has, evidently, been canceled without explanation.

02.07.2025 15:43 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
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UVAโ€™s Board of Visitors is holding a special, virtual meeting this morning at 11:30โ€”no doubt to discuss the shameful events of the past week.

You can watch the meeting here:

bov.virginia.edu/live

02.07.2025 11:34 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1
Submissions ALWD is a non-profit professional association with more than 300 members representing more than 150 law schools throughout the United States, Canada, and Austra

Call for Articles for Legal Communication & Rhetoric: JALWD Volume 23 (Fall 2026). Deadline: Sept. 1 for articles up to 15,000 words; essays up to 5,000 words on topics related to legal communication or rhetoric primarily intended for our practitioner audience. alwd.org/lcr-submissi...

25.06.2025 16:10 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 4    ๐Ÿ” 7    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

#LegalWriting
I'm an editor on this journal! If you have a piece that involves legal communication or rhetoric, something with a practical focus that will be of interest to lawyers, judges, and academics, then you should submit. You'll get a great editing experience, if I do say so myself.

25.06.2025 19:51 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 9    ๐Ÿ” 8    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 1    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1

SCOTUS majority not deigning to give *any* reasons for staying the injunction of the district court - in the highest-possible stakes context & where the executive branch has acted appallingly - evincing real contempt for both district courts & the rule of law

23.06.2025 21:21 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 3344    ๐Ÿ” 1017    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 158    ๐Ÿ“Œ 63

Itโ€™s fine, everyone. You see, we used to have dumb people overseeing our foreign policy. Now we have smart peopleโ€”you might even say the Best and the Brightest. No way that can go wrong.

22.06.2025 17:56 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 1    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0
The President's disastrous decision to bomb Iran without authorization is a grave violation of the Constitution and Congressional War Powers.
He has impulsively risked launching a war that may ensnare us for generations.
It is absolutely and clearly grounds for impeachment.

The President's disastrous decision to bomb Iran without authorization is a grave violation of the Constitution and Congressional War Powers. He has impulsively risked launching a war that may ensnare us for generations. It is absolutely and clearly grounds for impeachment.

AOC: โ€œIt is absolutely and clearly grounds for impeachment.โ€

22.06.2025 02:03 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 72173    ๐Ÿ” 16547    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 343    ๐Ÿ“Œ 1350

More fundamentally: how on Earth would you know if youโ€™re allergic to this brand-new drug? Youโ€™re supposed to โ€œask your doctorโ€ because youโ€™ve never even heard of it beforeโ€”let alone put it in your body.

21.06.2025 23:02 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 2    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

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19.06.2025 16:27 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 0    ๐Ÿ” 0    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 0    ๐Ÿ“Œ 0

I wish people would listen to people who write & teach writing for a living. We know that there is something *extremely important* contained within the process of writing. Writing, editing, revising, getting feedback, sitting with your thoughts, changing your thoughts. Writing IS thinking.

19.06.2025 11:11 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 462    ๐Ÿ” 153    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 12    ๐Ÿ“Œ 10
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Wild how the Fed chair saying that *entire regions of the United States* wonโ€™t be able to get a mortgage in the next decade barely registered as a news event

18.06.2025 20:14 โ€” ๐Ÿ‘ 16869    ๐Ÿ” 6861    ๐Ÿ’ฌ 441    ๐Ÿ“Œ 501

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