Oh no!
Maybe the pitch is helpful in getting back to the heart of the story?
#kidlitchat
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Oh no!
Maybe the pitch is helpful in getting back to the heart of the story?
#kidlitchat
Underrated movie. #kidlitchat
08.10.2025 01:27 — 👍 2 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0I've tried to do a combination. "The humorous tone of X with the found family of Y." But I always feel like there are better comps I'm missing.
How do you all feel about using non-books as comps? Recent movies... I've even heard of people using things like songs or paintings.
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Oddly, I think the few times I've had to do really short ones it was kind of freeing because I was like -- "500 words? Okay, guess we're just talking beginning, middle, and end then. Hope it makes sense." #kidlitchat
08.10.2025 01:17 — 👍 6 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0Nice.
08.10.2025 01:15 — 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0I have honestly seen little difference when I try to personalize, but I'm sure it's worked for some people. #kidlitchat
08.10.2025 01:11 — 👍 2 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0Ooh, my grammar there.
08.10.2025 01:09 — 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0Right? So many rules! And you're expected to know what's selling PRETTY good -- but not too good -- and heaven help you if you find a "perfect" comp that utterly tanked. Not the best look. #kidlitchat
08.10.2025 01:08 — 👍 3 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0Spoilsport. #kidlitchat
08.10.2025 01:05 — 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0I THINK I'm pretty decent at queries, pitches, and log lines... but synopses are exhausting and comps are the bane of my existence. #kidlitchat
08.10.2025 01:04 — 👍 13 🔁 0 💬 4 📌 0Okay, our dog is very insistent that I need to stop chatting because it's walk time, and delaying never wins that argument.
Night all!
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Interesting...
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I don't remember reading it as a kid, but few books were more fun to read to my kids than Cookie Monster and the Cookie Tree. Big laughs every single time.
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Yes! I read those in middle school, I think, in my effort to devour anything fantasy.
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Unrelated side note, my wife is still kind of terrified of that movie because she was scared of dogs as a kid and it had A GIANT FLYING DOG.
Talk about nightmare fodder.
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I think if I realized as a kid that the MOVIE The Neverending Story, which featured the BOOK The Neverending Story was itself actually a book, it would have blown my mind.
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Totally agree. Surprisingly terrifying for a "kid" book. And they DO hold up even now!
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Ooh, did anyone else have Read Magazine in school? I remember loving the short stories and sometimes they would have plays the teacher would have us read aloud. I was THAT kid who was really into it that everyone else thought was embarassingly hilarious. Good times.
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As I got a LITTLE older I remember being pretty into horror. Fear Street in the... lets say 8-10 range. And the Scary Stories books. Then pretty quickly into Stephen King, Dean Koontz, Clive Barker from 11 plus. Def read some things I probably shouldn't have. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:32 — 👍 4 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0I'm not sure what my favorite Seuss was. I seem to remember a lot of love for Fox in Socks.
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Love this. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:23 — 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0Bonus points if THEY don't remember the name of the book and we're helping them solve a mystery. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:22 — 👍 5 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0Right? Obviously derivative of that fantasy world Tolkien sort of invented in countless ways, but
1) I didn't know or care as a kid and
2) I stand by (my memory versions of) his characters being WAY stronger and more involving
...I don't know why I'm obsessing over the Tolkien thing
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How much did your name have to do with it? I mean that literally -- did you clock that it was Kirby and go, "Cool!" #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:17 — 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0Hey, I read Pippi to my 10-year-old when she was little and for a while it was her favorite, so there's no dating yourself -- they're timeless. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:15 — 👍 7 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0I love, love, loved reading it to my kids when they were little... and only partially because it's just too fun to do the Grover voice. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:13 — 👍 2 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0James and the Giant Peach for me. There was just something about that found family of bugs being so much more human and endearing than his awful aunts. Plus, you know, just all the crazy, clever stuff with the peach. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:12 — 👍 4 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0Oh, as a REALLY little kid, hands down There's a Monster at the End of This Book. It doesn't need explanation, does it? #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:08 — 👍 5 🔁 0 💬 2 📌 0Perhaps oddly, I also have a pretty strong love of Terry Brooks' The Sword of Shannara, which I also read in that 7-9 age range (and still kind of like it more than Lord of the Rings -- sorry, Tolkien people). #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:06 — 👍 3 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0Oof. I read A LOT. But I have a distinct memory of FINALLY finishing my beloved Chronicles of Narnia at age 7 and being pissed that it was all a Christian allegory. I mean, the least Lewis could have done was make it less explicit in book 7 for all of us who just wanted fantasy. Jeez. #kidlitchat
01.10.2025 01:02 — 👍 3 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0