Screenshot from Sister Boniface Mysteries, in which a handsome man stares longingly at a beautiful woman in a 1950's art gallery.
That face he makes when they've got a murder investigation to solve, but his love for her drives him to distraction. Jack and Charlotte will have to figure it all out in my debut mystery romance ONCE MORE, WITH MURDER. (2nd chance, women in STEM, WSW, bucolic)
#bluepit π #A #R #M #HS #Lgbt #DIS #Q
13.07.2025 10:17 β π 41 π 18 π¬ 3 π 0
Finding Fiona: An agent guide by Sara Wilkinson
The Pitch: Fiona Ivanov is a daddyβs girl who loved hockey. Loved playing, loved watching her pro dad play, loved watching their favorite team with him at her side. But after his death in a drunk driving accident, she pushes that love down and fills the void with an increasingly discordant relationship. A chance meeting with a fellow fan and painter, Paul, rekindles her love of the game and helps her reconnect with her late dad while she helps him embrace his artistic talent and reconnect with his living father.
The Particulars: Contemporary Romance: 84,000 words. Troupes: Impossible romance and Stranger-to-Friends-to-Lovers. Inspired by: Katy Perry's Not like the Movies. Comps: Before I Do, Mad About You, Something from Tiffany's.
The Passage: βYes, you.β Fiona glanced up at Paul but avoided his eyes. βWhat the hell is your deal? You invite me home like a stray cat. Fill me with cocoa and memories. Then toss me out without warning and ignore me for days. Then show up at the bar and act like Iβm not even there.β A ragged breath escaped her lips as her chest collapsed against her spine.
Paul knelt in front of her. His cheeks deflated as he slowly exhaled. βIβm attracted to you. More than I have any right to be. When Jonathon called, I realized this, us, was impossible. Pushing you away seemed like the best option. But then tonight, when you looked so upset, itβ¦β Paul reached over and lifted her chin with his forefinger. βIβd rather have you in my life than not. Even if that means being stuck in the friend zone.β
BEFORE I DO x MAD ABOUT YOU
Fiona is a daddyβs girl who loved hockey, but after his death she canβt even look at her skates. It will take a chance meeting with a painter and fellow hockey fan to help her revive her love of hockey and fully mourn her biggest fanβs death.
#Bluepitπ #Bluepit #A #R #Q
13.07.2025 18:16 β π 40 π 14 π¬ 0 π 0
Collage of images, zodiac wheel, solar system planets in a straight line, scorpio constellation, virgo constellation, text saying the villain and text saying the hero
Collage of images, water bending, flowing shadows, dagger, skull, scorpio constellation. And three quotes saying, villain, not evil just broken, we were told that the villains are villains because theyβve done bad things but no one ever asked why.
Collage of images, rock floating, constellations, virgo constellation, crown, council room, text saying heavy is the head that wears the crown, text saying the hero pays the price
ATLA x WICKED
For readers who like:
π€ Villain POV
π€ Womenβs rights and wrongs
π€ Zodiac based world
π€ Sapphic grumpy/sunshine
π€ Men with anxiety
π€ Mind Reading
π€ Dead mommy issues
#BluePit #BluePitπ #YA #Q #F #POC
13.07.2025 18:27 β π 33 π 18 π¬ 3 π 0
DEATH AT MORNING HOUSE x THE AGATHAS
17-yr-old Emmie has the coolest job at a bookstore with her sapphic crush, but when a patron dies during her momβs book event, all eyes are turned towards her. She needs to get her life back and not get killed in the process. #Bluepitπ #Q #YA #M #LGBT #Bluepit
13.07.2025 18:51 β π 33 π 11 π¬ 0 π 0
Shattered glass background with crime thriller pitch text
HUNTING SHADOWS
#bluepitπ #A #C #Q #CrimeThriller #PsychologicalThriller #AmQuerying #ThrillerWriters #WomenInSTEM #DualPOV #DarkFiction
13.07.2025 18:52 β π 9 π 2 π¬ 0 π 0
A woman in a white empire-waisted gown stares into the distance. A gold clock is superimposed over her. The text over the image reads, "The Genesis Clock."
Pitch for The Genesis Clock:
Imbued with time magic, chronoglass could alter the Napoleonic Wars.
For cryptographer Georgiana Adams, it gives her the chance to erase the moment that soiled her character and forced her betrothed to leave her. For Joshua Durand, the chronoglass would undo the mistake that crippled him in the Battle of Trafalgar and cost him his job as a British spy.
When they catch each other stealing chronoglass, they make a deal: they won't turn the other in as long as they work together and ration the precious magic. The deal should be easy--until they fall in love.
Comparable titles for The Genesis Clock:
- The Austenian writing style of Pride and Prejudice
- The time-traveling spies of This is How You Lose the Time War by Amal El-Mohtar and Max Gladstone
- The feminist social commentary of Queen Bee by Amalie Howard
- The Regency magic of A Fragile Enchantment by Allison Saft
A snippet from The Genesis Clock:
"The opportunity to control time, to hold raw power even for a moment, lured Joshua in.
His fingers closed around the chronoglass. Frigid cold shot through his bones, so cold he wanted to drop the glass, so cold his knee almost collapsed, but then it warmed to his skin. He looked around the room for a sign that something had changed. Everything was the same. The map, the steaming tea, Mr. Brooke standing beside the ticking clock.
Brooke smiled and opened his mouth, but something about the movement of his lips was odd. He spoke, speech gargled. What in heaven's name ...?
Joshua's gaze sharpened. Steam curled back into hot liquid. The second hand moved backward one, two, ten seconds. He reached for his gloves, and they rose on their own to meet his fingers, skin and velvet meshing.
His body reacted before his mind did. Muscles unclenched, and velvet and chronoglass crumpled to the desk. Joshua sucked in a breath.
The stories were true."
PRIDE & PREJUDICE x TENET
A socialite-turned-cryptographer must time travel to reverse her ruined reputation and get her fiancΓ© backβbut when she meets a handsome time traveler, she wonders if finding love in the past is worth the risk.
#BluePitπ #Q #YA #F #DIS #ND #agentsguide #amquerying
13.07.2025 17:00 β π 36 π 19 π¬ 3 π 1
Moody crime thriller board with dark tones
HUNTING SHADOWS
You X Kill For Me, Kill For You
π΅οΈββοΈ Badass female detective
𧬠CSI with a hidden past
πͺ A killer whoβs rules keep him invisible
βοΈ Loyalty vs. protocol
π€ Secret investigation
π§ Dual POV: detective + killer
π¨ Broken trust
π£ Someone WILL die
#bluepitπ #A #C #T #Q
13.07.2025 17:17 β π 19 π 5 π¬ 1 π 0
a moodboard detailing nine images related to my work in progress devilswip, in order from right to left they are: london notably the landmark big ben, a band performing on stage, a sheet of music, a record store, the silhouette of a rockstar, some musical instruments scattered on a bed, two men running, a pile of evidence and finally a hand holding a cigarette
πΈ daisy jones x knives out π‘οΈ
the songstress, the high-flyer, the gambler, the sweetheart, the watcher, the matriarch and the rogue. seven suspects. one the killer of renowned rockstar sam corvi. but who? only they can tell you
#BluePit #Q #A #LF #M #BluePitπ
13.07.2025 04:00 β π 123 π 48 π¬ 3 π 0
The image shows a horror-comedy novel cover titled "DAD BODIES." The top of the cover reads "THE GAME JUST TOOK A DAD TURN" with "DAD" in a different color.
The background features a haunted house with multiple towers and illuminated windows against a dark backdrop. At the center is a 20-sided die (D20) used in tabletop role-playing games like Dungeons & Dragons, with visible numbers including 1, 7, 13, and 19. The die is surrounded by red blood splatter effects.
At the bottom of the cover are six men with expressions of terror and shock. One man is wearing a white shirt over his head. These men are the dads referenced in the title.
CABIN IN THE WOODS Γ JOHN DIES AT THE END Γ KNIVES OUT
When their detective friend is murdered during their annual gaming retreat, 5 dads must rely on years of #TTRPG experienceβand punsβto solve the crime before they're all killed off like NPCs in a badly written campaign.
#BluePit π #A #H #M #Q
13.07.2025 04:03 β π 168 π 94 π¬ 12 π 1
Season 2 was my favorite. 3 was so so. Although each season is its βownβ they do have an interesting story that flows through them. Starting at season one is worth it. You just happened to start with the not great season.
08.07.2025 15:43 β π 0 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
Yes! It was such a great movie!
21.06.2025 18:10 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Paul Wellington isnβt just a killer. Heβs a perfectionist.
For ten years, heβs refined his method, killing women like her.
But they were only practice.
You meets Kill for Me, Kill for You. Where obsession is the blueprint and murder is just the rehearsal.
#amquerying #writingcommunity
12.06.2025 05:51 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Iβm listening to a book, reading a book, writing an outline, constantly thinking about possibilities for my bookβ¦oh and querying π. Iβm sure I could fit one more story in my brain though. π€ͺ
#writingcommunity #writer #storyofmylife
02.06.2025 04:05 β π 9 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Yay!! Congratulations!!!!
29.05.2025 02:32 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
Ugggh being a Timberwolves fan is heartbreaking.
29.05.2025 01:21 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
In the waiting period of the query trenches. I think itβs time to start writing the next book π. Maybe it will keep me from checking my email ππ€¦π»ββοΈ. #HeresToHoping #WritingCommunity #TheStruggleIsReal
26.05.2025 17:16 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Writing Hunting Shadows taught me this:
Monsters donβt always hide in the dark.
Sometimes, they smile and hold the door.
#WritersLife #ThrillerCommunity #amquerying #DarkReads #CrimeThriller
23.05.2025 15:46 β π 3 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Eek! Just got a full request from a dream agent!! I cannot contain my excitement!! #amquerying #writingcommunity #thtiller
22.05.2025 17:58 β π 5 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Also, I think it depends on your book. If your voices have equal space in the book I think they deserve equal space in the query. And my opinion is yes itβs pertinent info.
20.05.2025 23:10 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Yes! Mine is dual POV. I asked an agent their opinion and they said one paragraph for each POV and one that brings them together. I have a lot of thoughts but not enough space. Happy to chat if youβd like!
20.05.2025 23:07 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Iβm querying with a psychological crime thriller, so I know the struggle π. Donβt give all the twists but if thereβs one in the front half of your book you can share it. Just donβt be vague about the stakes because youβre leaving something out.
20.05.2025 22:39 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
Haha!! So true!
17.05.2025 23:50 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
As a thriller writer, do you find yourself watching a show or movie and guessing when everything is about to go wrong? Iβm usually right, and my husband is always surprised π€£. Except when I think it during a bluey episode π€¦π»ββοΈ.
#writerlife #thriller
16.05.2025 16:10 β π 3 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
Ha! I can imagine. I didnβt even consider that, and will continue that way. π
14.05.2025 23:38 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
Fair point. Thank you!
14.05.2025 23:30 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
That makes sense, thank you! Would you be thrown off to see a query that started with the antagonist instead of the protagonist in this situation?
14.05.2025 23:19 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
I have a crime thriller thatβs dual POV - detective and killer. How important is it that my query show both perspectives?
14.05.2025 22:54 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0
Writing a killerβs POV means climbing into a mindset you really donβt want to live in π but you have to linger just long enough. #ThrillerWriterLife #writingcommunity #amquerying
14.05.2025 15:35 β π 4 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0
26 || She/They || π Boston
Writer of psychological thriller, horror, and things that go bump in the night. Autistic, queer, and going nowhere π³οΈβπ π³οΈββ§οΈ
π« No AI π«
I #amquerying The Emerald Kingdom (WT). A romantic fantasy about growing through grief, inspired by the Wizard of Oz. (Hot scarecrow, anyone?) Die-hard millennial who crushes a can of Celsius every night to write between my day job and momming. Latina.
Teacher by dayπ©βπ« Author by night βπ» | Mom of 3 | ADHDer| Fueled by Chaos & Caffeine |
Author of #Wisteraverse High #Fantasy novels,
Informatics Ph.D. & Scientist,
Emotional Support Human to 3 mischievous cats,
π€
Polyglot | Neurodivergent | She/They
https://linktr.ee/Wisteraverse
http://ko-fi.com/Wisteraverse
β unsolicited DMs = ignoredπ«
thedanlines.co.uk || Just another writer wading through the WIPs || #writing
writer. teacher. mother. #amquerying zombies
βΎοΈ she/her/hers. #landback #blacklivesmatter #freepalestine
Book Lover & Writer | Proud Jewapino | RevPit '25 Shortlist
I write womenβs fiction with romance and HEAs.
π Mummy to two beautiful kids π wife to a wonderful husband π aspiring author
36, she/her. Gamer, storyteller, polytheist. I like to write books about monsters, romance, and monster romance. π΅ππΊπΈ amshilling.com
Current projects:
βTHE DEVOURING, cosmic horror thriller
βSHARP OF FANG, LONG OF CLAW, paranormal horror/romance
π« No AI
Running for Congress (IL-09) because we deserve Democrats who actually do something | katforillinois.com
Romance reader, sentence appreciator. She/her. I do close readings of romance novels at closereadingromance.com
GRAPHIC RAGE on Substack. Writer & illustrator of stories, essays and feminist comics. '22 NEA fellow. Work in TIME, Vox, New York Times, Washington Post, etc. Very charming IRL. she/her
Public figure. Author, composer, keyboardist, university grad. Author of the THE HIDDEN FACE:
https://www.thriftbooks.com/w/the-hidden-face_m-i-verras/39420061/#edition=67723160&idiq=59042592
https://www.amazon.com/Hidden-Face-M-I-Verras/dp/B0CBW5MNC2
Fantasy and sci-fi author whose works have appeared in Crimson Quill Quarterly, Sword & Sorcery Magazine, and Waystation.
www.thomasgrayfson.com
South-West UK π¬π§
Mystery & Thriller enthusiast β
'The world was hers for the reading.'
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