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@meloniewithano.bsky.social

She/Her MG and YA Fantasy writer deep in revision land. Member of #SCBWI. Wife. Mom to one human and 3 beasts. Average Musician. Newb archer. #WritingCommunity Same name on IG #RoundTableMentor mentee 2025

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a man with a mustache is making a funny face with his eyes closed in a bar . ALT: a man with a mustache is making a funny face with his eyes closed in a bar .

Second edit letter in my inbox!!!
At first glance the feedback looks amazing eeeeek I’m so excited to dive in!
#WritingCommunity #amrevising #amwriting #fantasy #YA

26.08.2025 17:27 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Oooh I love this

03.06.2025 17:32 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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a girl wearing sunglasses stands in front of a crowd of children ALT: a girl wearing sunglasses stands in front of a crowd of children

One of the hardest things is writing MCs who take action when you've always been a rule follower.
Over here trying to change my ending so it's not the trusted adults taking over the plot.
Gotta dig deep for my inner rebel πŸ˜… #WritingCommunity #amrevising #YA

14.05.2025 17:22 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

You’re welcome!

16.04.2025 23:23 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I think we're supposed to leave the actual hashtag for agents to use. Besides that, just a lot of research. MSWL works great, finding agencies you like and narrowing down to the agent you'd prefer to work with, and querying in small batches. Good luck!

16.04.2025 17:52 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

Yes! It was our first time out on the lake this year. So excited for warm weather.

13.04.2025 13:14 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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Got out of revisions for the day for a little fresh air.

13.04.2025 03:01 β€” πŸ‘ 4    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0
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The first revisions call with my mentor went great and I left with a page full of notes!
#amediting #amrevising #yafantasy #booksky

23.03.2025 21:40 β€” πŸ‘ 14    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Haha same. The algo seems a bit different but happy to connect!

14.03.2025 20:30 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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a man in a white shirt and black shorts is standing in front of a brick house . ALT: a man in a white shirt and black shorts is standing in front of a brick house .
14.03.2025 19:05 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

Yes! I'm diving in right away

14.03.2025 00:32 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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a woman is holding a banana in her hands and making a funny face . ALT: a woman is holding a banana in her hands and making a funny face .

Eeek I have something so exciting in my inbox!!!!
(It's my round 1 edit letter for RoundTableMentor!)
#WritingCommunity

13.03.2025 23:21 β€” πŸ‘ 4    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

What are some modern #mg books similar to:
Because of Winn-Dixie
Tuck Everlasting
Bridge to Terabithia
Maybe something with that magical realism feeling born out of childhood imagination with emotional depth. #BookSky

07.03.2025 19:01 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Thank you!

03.03.2025 21:50 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

"What if this is all a big joke?" "What if my mentor thinks announcing this is super weird?"
Well, it's out there now, so here's me hesitantly celebrating a win and ALSO celebrating my buddy, Jenna, for her amazing poetry!

03.03.2025 18:11 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
Newsletter: "Congratulations Melonie! Chattanooga-area member Melonie Kirchoff was selected as a mentee for Round Table Mentor. She will be working on a YA contemporary fantasy with mentor Karis Rogerson.

Newsletter: "Congratulations Melonie! Chattanooga-area member Melonie Kirchoff was selected as a mentee for Round Table Mentor. She will be working on a YA contemporary fantasy with mentor Karis Rogerson.

Super honest post 🧡
Celebrating accomplishments is very hard given my ✨flavor✨ of OCD. My SCBWI area coordinator asked me to send in my good news for the newsletter and the whole time I'm sweating thinking: "What if I hallucinated that acceptance email?" (I checked it again at least 5 times)

03.03.2025 18:09 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0
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I think this is the final product until I get physical copies of some new faves. #booksky

28.02.2025 18:55 β€” πŸ‘ 4    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

For sure. Don’t sweat the small stuff and keep moving forward.

27.02.2025 20:19 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

My querying and writing is going absolutely nowhere. I have no intention of quitting, that would only make me more unhappy. What I really need is a writing critique group to join. My last group kinda died. Is there anyone out there in a group with room for another writer? I write MG and YA ☺️

27.02.2025 18:02 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

I don’t but I’ll repost for visibility!

27.02.2025 18:43 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

I’m sure you’re doing great! I cringe thinking back to my first few query letters πŸ˜‚

27.02.2025 18:42 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

Oh thank you! A friend made that based off of our dog.

26.02.2025 19:22 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

Ooh that’s smart! Thank you!

26.02.2025 19:22 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Thank you! Plants are a great idea!

26.02.2025 19:21 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Ooh I don't have a lot of knickknacks but plants are a great idea!

26.02.2025 18:06 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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Does anybody have advice for displaying books?
We just finished building our bookshelf and I piled these on.
Some may be moved upstairs to make it more ✨pretty✨
#booksky

26.02.2025 17:52 β€” πŸ‘ 10    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 1
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An oldie but a goodie #writersky #writingcommunity

24.02.2025 13:49 β€” πŸ‘ 11    πŸ” 2    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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Snow day 😍😍😍

19.02.2025 14:30 β€” πŸ‘ 5    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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You, Me, and the Writing Journey Podcast Podcast Β· Danielle Render Turmaud, PhD Β· A podcast that meets at the intersection of all things literary + mental health, providing insights, tips, tools, and support surrounding well-being in the wri...

I'm (finally) listening to episode one @ymwjpodcast.bsky.social and it's fantastic!
open.spotify.com/show/5em12Iu...

17.02.2025 18:20 β€” πŸ‘ 4    πŸ” 2    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0
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Episode 3 of @ymwjpodcast.bsky.social is LIVE! In this episode, @careybk.bsky.social shares her experiences during a decade of querying. Whether you are #amquerying or not, this episode is full of insights on caring for yourself/how to persevere! πŸ’œ #writingcommunity

open.spotify.com/episode/1b54...

16.02.2025 14:16 β€” πŸ‘ 7    πŸ” 3    πŸ’¬ 3    πŸ“Œ 1

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