Is this as bad as the time Brandon Sanderson had a typo where the female lead was "trying so hard not to ccream?" π
29.07.2025 05:45 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0@phantomcortex.bsky.social
Is this as bad as the time Brandon Sanderson had a typo where the female lead was "trying so hard not to ccream?" π
29.07.2025 05:45 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0Two of my betas said they had to look up words I used and I know how I feel about the landing...
Go ahead and Yes this one? π
@beingcam.bsky.social crane-kicked this out of the park! Absolutely on fire! π₯
28.07.2025 04:43 β π 3 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0Oh no! π
I can only imagine this happens at last minute edits....
"Their neck craned..." Hmm, too passive and overly awkward, "They peeked..." Much more direct, conveys intent. I'm sure this is better.
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Definitely not me anyway. I used it twice. Perhaps thrice.
My condolences to 129916!
It wouldn't be authentic otherwise!
30.05.2025 12:22 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0Now that doesn't seem fair; we don't get to emotionally recover... I don't think you should get the chance either!
Johnson up!
I did wonder about this comment!
I had a kiss, a song, a ring and, arguably, a gift too; and wondered if any were mine. π
Wow, Deano! Thanks! I appreciate that!
(Still waiting on my name living up to expectations π)
Definitely feeling the sting of missing this LL, @notquitewrite.com
Do you sell the voodoo dolls, or is this a DIY affair?
I feel you, Holly.
All this suffering... When will @notquitewrite.com be brave enough to make "Johnson" the prompt word? ππ§
I haven't watched it. I've basically avoided all the "live action" remakes of amazing originals.
There's nothing wrong with the original cartoons π
Amazing!!
Well done! I can't wait to hear the next big good news! β€οΈ
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Ooh, also the one about "voice" and "sealed lips" that you mentioned was your first "yes" (and if it survived to the long list)
16.05.2025 14:38 β π 3 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0Is this the kind of warning I want wine or an empty stomach for? π
16.05.2025 14:32 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0I'm in a house with 3 sick kids and the my wife's been their latest victim; if I survive this I'm certain I can stomach the stories. π
(or I'll have a good excuse, at least)
Yesssss! These! Especially the list one!
16.05.2025 05:55 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0Have a live episode! It will be exciting, or something π
15.05.2025 04:20 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0You can't wait, we can't wait.... So... We get the longlist today, right? π
14.05.2025 23:43 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0π±
13.05.2025 15:42 β π 0 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0It looks like the longlist will release on June 1st.
By then they will know the shortlist and winner; but they need to record the podcast episodes in the interim which is where it takes the time.
I think that's correct, anyway.
So we cultivated our darlings so we could send them to your slaughterhouse? π°
13.05.2025 15:38 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0I'm storing up those vibes for the Flesh Fiction....
13.05.2025 08:18 β π 0 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0I have been feeling struttier today. π€
13.05.2025 08:15 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0I hope I stuck the landing π¬π€
11.05.2025 13:18 β π 4 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0Oh no!
I definitely had mine in there (I quadruple checked before submitting) but I bet this poor person edited it out right at the end by accident. π
I've liked all of them so far too. It just gets me thinking differently, which is such fun!
06.05.2025 11:20 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0Oooh, nice!
I remember looking before and not finding any except at silly prices.
Looking now they seem a bit more reasonable so I'll buy some too. π₯³
I was looking at making it a diy project for doing with the kids, but time and effort. π
Ahhh!
I've been looking at getting some of these too!
Did you build your own or order one?
East to install, and any advice on putting one in?