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To be determinificated.

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Paddington Bear (what with his use of the British Method of tea consumption).

24.04.2025 01:10 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I'm not sure that stage ever quite leaves us.

07.12.2024 17:17 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

:)

07.12.2024 16:34 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Can't figure out how to "follow" a list. It's confusing.

06.12.2024 23:08 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

bsky.app/profile/did:...

06.12.2024 23:07 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0

There are lists that you can follow. I have one around here somewhere. Hang on . . .

06.12.2024 23:04 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Kettles are great for reheating leftovers.

06.12.2024 05:36 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I prefere "show and tell" to "show, don't tell" if anything. The former actually provides some guidance while tha latter provides years of wasted words. (I have opinions, and they're ornery.)

05.12.2024 01:45 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Oops! Missed a word!

*I insisted that showing required demonstration. As in physical act or state that demonstrates something else.

05.12.2024 01:42 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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Really, check out writingexcuses.com. I think those folks are on the nose when it comes to understanding this stuff. Authors, agents and editors have great discussions on all sorts of subjects and have done so for years. (I'll hunt down some of the various folks and stick them in the thread.)

05.12.2024 01:37 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
16.33: Tell, Don’t Show Your Hosts:Β DongWon Song, Mary Robinette Kowal, Dan Wells, and Howard Tayler Few pieces of writing advice get repeated as much as that old saw β€œshow, don’t tell.” We’re here to show tell you that it’s...

The fellow insisted that any sufficiently descriptive passage was showing while I insisted that showing required.

It's a profound disagreement about something that's pretty trivial, all things considered.

Here's a great discussion on the topic.
writingexcuses.com/16-33-tell-d...

05.12.2024 01:37 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0

I just (as in over the past day) had an odd argument of what constitutes /tell/ vs /show/ in the oft repeated /Show, Don't Tell/ advice (which I profoundly dislike).

05.12.2024 01:37 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 1

The difference between business for business' sake and business for passion's sake.

03.12.2024 18:51 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Generative "AI" is, at the moment at least, no good for anyone, anyhow, anyway.

02.12.2024 23:16 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

R'Amen

02.12.2024 23:09 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I thought elves were hors d'oeuvres.

02.12.2024 17:15 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

My dice tend to bend me.

02.12.2024 17:05 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

There's a xenomorph at work, and I think it's stealing my lunch. What should I do?

01.12.2024 17:53 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Well, shit.

01.12.2024 07:17 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

*bead

01.12.2024 03:24 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Kilby's on the back burner. The POV, voice, and narratice structure are all on the challenging end of things.

Norbert, OTOH, is hitting its stride. There's something about face eating felines that makes an ostensibly romance book a little more thoothsome.

Yum.

01.12.2024 03:23 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

So here goes a post.

I've got dozens upon dozens of half-baked shorts and several quarter-baked novel(ish) works. Got three that I've got a beed on. One's rather personal. The other two are __Norbert__ and __Kilby Blades Ate my Face__.

01.12.2024 03:17 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0

Well, @tniederriter.bsky.social, looks like I finally got myself an account with this thing.

01.12.2024 03:09 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

@paulecooley.bsky.social, this looks tons better than Twitter.

01.12.2024 02:38 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

Twitter is dead, long live the Sky.

01.12.2024 02:32 β€” πŸ‘ 3    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

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