I reread it, which is good because there was a typo in the first paragraph...
05.12.2025 20:20 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0@haileysforest.bsky.social
What is life if not to learn? https://www.youtube.com/@haileysforest
I reread it, which is good because there was a typo in the first paragraph...
05.12.2025 20:20 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0have I hit a lull with edits because I have been overloaded with work this week or because I am lazy and unmotivated?
Who knows!
I am really open for any feedback! Mostly looking for peoples opinions on the plot, pacing and characters and overall enjoyment!
05.12.2025 18:38 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0the question is do i reread and do some final edits on my school paper or submit it as is because I only need >50% to pass the class?
05.12.2025 18:37 β π 3 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0Yay! Right now its 86k but there is a little bit more I plan to add in this last round of editing so it will likely end up being between 85k-90k
05.12.2025 18:31 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0title page for a goddesses blessing beta reader guide overtop picture of a stone figure
Pitch for a goddesses blessing: Nisa is willing to do whatever it takes to kill the king; including giving up her fate. She casts the lost spell and it brings her to Ezra. Ezra needs a goddess's blessing to finish his mission and join the king's guard. He prays, and summons Nisa. Nisa tricks him into helping her, confident his assumptions are as much a lie as the ones she is feeding him. But as the world starts to shift with her emotions, she wonders whose hands her fate is truly in.
a comparative book guide, with spin the dawn, lore, furyborn, and empress of all seasons
A warning on the darker themes discussed in the book including kidnapping, torture, suicidal ideation, murder, and rape.
ATTENTION #writingcommunity
I am looking for 3-4 readers for this dark dual-pov fantasy!
If you want to beta read, or swap support, please comment below! #authors #writers #books
This month was not the greatest in terms of poetry. But I still got a few done, and my unfinished ideas have motivated me to try something new...
In December I will finish all my 'failed' ideas, but if you want to read the ones that blossomed click below
haileysforest.substack.com/p/november-p...
I feel like GODDESSwip is a peanut butter cookie. I don't know why, it just makes sense
04.12.2025 18:03 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0In October I read a pretty bad book, but instead of giving it away, I decided to try something new
I went through and edited the poems to be in my image, and learned a lot along the way. Which turned out to be a lot of fun and a great writing exercise!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=SYoP...
Today's writing goal is to edit 7 chapters of GODDESSwip
Any guesses on how many I do or how long it takes me?
My first official substack post will be coming this weekend, but I figured I would share this now in case you want to read the backlog!
haileysforest.substack.com
Sometimes I think I am a writer just so I can make up people that can't get mad at me
01.12.2025 23:53 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0i dont know the actual guy just the car
01.12.2025 23:41 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0I was halfway into reading this when I realized "THE 3-HEART SWORDLESS RUN OF OCARINA OF TIME IS COMPLETED! (except for 3 spots where a sword is mandatory)" is not a very cool and long book name but a video game thing...
01.12.2025 00:05 β π 0 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0it's really cool when you finish the hard edits of your book and get to move onto the easy stuff.
Like last week I was reworking the ending and adding 2 new chapters, this week I am figuring out if I want to change this side characters name because a book I am currently reading uses it
There are some people I am convinced are NPCs
Especially this guy who has an eagles(the football team) shine on top of his car and he will blast bird nosies and the fight song. Like I see him at least once a week and am convinced he does nothing but drive around. HOW COULD HE BE REAL
I decided to skip writing to watch sports this morning... I shouldn't have let myself get invested
29.11.2025 19:56 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0That is a wrap on the developmental edits of GODDESSwip! Somehow I managed to get it done in a month
Now to add 2 more chapters and fix a few small things before line edits!
made an 'oops all food' moodboard for KNEADING ANSWERS
#agents if you want cooks with a side of slow burn romance and a serving of cozy mystery, keep an eye out for this contemporary romance in your inbox!
#amquerying
I did three things off tomorrows to-do list!
I didn't do 6 things on todays...
Itβs time to light the candles and celebrate national cake day!
Writing is a long process, so tell us about some of your milestones and achievements! #writingcommunity
at #foodpit we are celebrating 39 days of existence!
yall i am so excited for my next video, I just wrote a 2300 word script in 40 minutes
25.11.2025 17:45 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0This is one of my favorite things to do. In GODDESSwip I take 'only one bed' and turn it into 'too many beds'
25.11.2025 17:00 β π 8 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0I'm starting to set up my substack... and why didn't I do this sooner? I am so excited
25.11.2025 16:59 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0The problem with being crafty is i don't buy anything because i think i can make it. A fancy dinner? I could cook that. A holiday sweater? I can crochet that. Literally any dessert? Let me open my oven. Artwork? I can paint that
25.11.2025 02:18 β π 5 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0we have officially reached the part of dev edits where I am jumping around because there are too many chapters I am scared of.
A lot of these last ones need near complete rewrites, but I think I will be able to get it done this week!
when you come across the perfect album to help push you to finish editing <3 #writingcommunity
22.11.2025 18:19 β π 4 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0This graphic is too cute
22.11.2025 00:38 β π 2 π 0 π¬ 1 π 0Why do I feel like we have moved on from the A ____ of ____ and _____ titles to just A _____ and a _____
21.11.2025 19:28 β π 1 π 0 π¬ 0 π 0GODDESSwip is starting to take a toll on me which means I have more motivation to edit KNEADING ANSWERS again!
A win is a win even if I have to abandon my favorite character for a night