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#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 1 -- using "battle" for compete just because I loved writing this interaction so much. There's so much ego and attitude in this room, and it's clear Khoda only has respect for the other "level head" in that room, Josef.
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Just finished watching Poker Face S2 & loved it as much as the first. Just sublime television: smart, funny, and full of heart. I absolutely adore Charlie Cale, and I've got my fingers crossed for good news about a third season. Highly recommend! 5⭐
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#WIPSnips from Survival Instinct -- Stella, Gregory, and Captain Jones discover a connection between cases related to Rae and Kylie's.
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#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 1 -- Monah's POV, meeting Evlin's family after arriving in Piatra Invelis.
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#WIPSnips going for vibes with "tendency" for "trend" -- from Survival Instinct. Some wisdom and reflection from Nanette. I really enjoy being in her head.
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I'm interested. Would you be willing to discuss the details in DM?

#WIPSnips going with vibes from Monah Bk. 2 b/c "engage" from Survival Instinct was very spoilery. Khoda & Criseyde are Realms leaders from Piatra and trying to help Faldor. They have a bit of history...
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Thank you!!

Agreed! Such a great writing community here! 😁

It really is, and I've read some very solid writing over the past month--including yours! I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Thank you!! 😁 Same to you!!

Thank you!! I am so far!! 😁

#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 1 -- Citizens of Piatra Invelis discuss Faldor's manipluations to maintain power.
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I wanted to say thank you to the #WIPSnips community. Sharing snippets during July was the first time I've shared my fiction with perfect strangers. You made me feel welcome and boosted my confidence a ton, thanks! 💖
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#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 2 -- Evlin and Sonja take stock on Monah, Faldor, and Piatra Invelis after the events at the end of Book 1.
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#WIPSnips from Survival Instinct -- We meet Corinne, Kylie's mother, just before she realizes something might be wrong.
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I can see this action sequence very clearly and feel the urgency behind it. I think you wrote it well!

#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 1 -- Monah's getting used to her transition, from human to vampire. Glossary: Termathippians are Piatra Invelis citizens with mixed natures (both witch and vampire traits), and Viragians are pure witch.
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How about: condensation or puddle of condensation?

#WIPSnips from Survival Instinct -- Ken and Nanette discuss Rae as they realize that something might be wrong, since neither one of them have heard from her.
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#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 1 -- Wilem is choosing a side after Monah's show of force.
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aren't morally grey characters THE BEST

#WIPSnips from KD and Jaz's story -- going for vibes, when bail means "abandon" -- Doug is bailing on his responsibility, avoiding accountability, after the day's headline accuses him of a major coverup.
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#WIPSnips going for vibes, using "grow" from Monah's Bk. 2 -- Monah is finally meeting Basalt, an Ancient, and Wilem's father.
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#WIPSnips from Survival Instinct -- Jim needs to soothe himself after Dinah's visit upsets him, so he goes to the spare room in his home.
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Thank you!! 😁

#WIPSnips from Monah's Bk. 1 -- Monah is filled with memories of her mother after being faced with the decision to leave the life she's built.
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#WIPSnips going for vibes -- using "annoying" for needle -- from Survival Instinct. Rae can tolerate capitivity, but she's starting to get a little restless (mostly hangry).
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