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Oh, I'd be too embarrassed at this stage, but I'll keep you in mind for Beta!

First round. This was a NaNoWriMo fever dream. I have an alpha reader ready to go when I’ve finished these edits.

Thanks! Still finishing up some edits!

Thanks! I probably missed a lot of pitches I would have liked too! There was a lot going on!

My writer friend has his book on audible. I read them rather than listened, but I really enjoyed the series. a.co/d/39NbUpB

Wow, thanks! I'll keep you in mind!

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When humanity goes extinct, three AI decide to recreate them. Unable to agree on how to improve them, each takes their own planet to make the perfect humans; Kaia is one of those humans, and she’s on the wrong planet.

The sense of place in this is amazing btw. So glad to have had the chance to read it!

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A girl with the ability to see the future in an isolated village must uncover the secret of a stranger's arrival to recover lost magic before everyone falls to an endless sleep from magic withdrawal.

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Thanks!!! I’m almost done editing the ending! I swear!

Thanks! This is an older version of my pitch. I’m lucky to have very helpful critique partners!

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In an era when magic has been reduced to apps in cybernetic implants, a prank gone wrong throws James Castor into the past with an ancient magitech glove. He must find a way home before someone collects the bounty placed on his head by the goddess.

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He can’t remember why he tried to kill his AI god because those memories were wiped to quell his rebellious thoughts. But as much as he wants the peace of a new life, forgotten friends and lovers are trying to drag him back to his old one.

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When a mortal woman with a cosplay sword storms a dark fairytale realm in search of her kidnapped brother, she becomes the linchpin in a war between a monster king and a demigod who plans to smother the sun. ཐིཋྀ THE MOTH KING (109K) ཐིཋྀ #AgentGuide #AgentGuides #Romantasy #Fantasy #AmQuerying #Writers

A boroque styled sitting room, a butler’s uniform, an apple tree, a circular space station orbiting a planet, a grand staircase, a serious secretary, a quaint thatched-roof cottage

As the butler of an ancient, luxury space station, Bayle has no time in his busy schedule for love.
But when he meets the mysterious, gruff, and taciturn new secretary, Nora, he may find that time waits for no manservant.

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Meet the Main Character: Linatta Mosset: curmudgeon, witch, plant-enthusiast, and a secret harborer of a sense of humor. Her best friend is Toad, a cat-shaped familiar with a snarky (but loveable) attitude. Her chronic illness makes life challenging, but her journey is full of heart and humor. Despite a past riddled with heartbreak, she falls in love with a charismatic thief.

Snippet: “Hmph. Really, Linatta? I chose you for your good sense, and only a ridiculous witch would believe that hats are harmless. Everyone who wears them is untrustworthy.” Despite Linatta’s best efforts to lock away the name, it slipped from her mouth, “Charly never wore hats. That didn’t make her trustworthy.” Toad leapt onto Linatta’s lap and placed a paw over her heart. In his sincerest voice, he said, “Charly was different. She probably wore hats in secret.”

First Lines: Potions Unincorporated Twelve vials sat on a shelf where one hundred should rest. Linatta Mosset picked up one of the tapered glasses—thumb-sized and filled to the brim with a warm, green liquid. She uncorked it and took a hard swallow. Bitterness struck first, but it disappeared after a few seconds and slipped into a nutty and earthy aftertaste.

Comps: Under The Whispering Door by TJ Klune (The Humor & Heart) + Legends and Lattes by Travis Baldree (The Cozy Fantasy Vibes) + The Very Secret Society of Irregular Witches (The Romance) = Potions Unincorporated. Covers for each of the novels are next to each other on a green slides with plants.

THE SPELLSHOP x HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE

A curmudgeonly witch with a chronic illness must work with a cheerful thief to stand up to a greedy pharmaceutical company.

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The #RevPit agent showcase is officially live! 🎉

#LitAgents can view my cozy romantic fantasy query letter and first 5 pages at the following link:

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A request form is at the bottom of the page for agents interested in seeing more 👀

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This book will make you cry like it did to me even though I wrote it

Pitch: After encountering an alien while dealing with grief, Astra, a runaway, must choose between saving humanity from an alien invasion and reconciling with her dad before it’s too late.

Agents/Editors guide to my YA literary sci-fi

INTERSTELLAR meets NOPE with the emotional appeal and first alien contact of ARRIVAL (2016) & the suspense and alien hostility of THE FIFTH WAVE

Today is 2094 & dealing with grief. What worse could possibly happen?
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She can smell the future; he can feel it. When her childhood best friend, and his brother, goes missing after uncovering a government conspiracy, they must work together to out-predict the future unfolding before their eyes.

IF THEY SHOULD MATE their child would be the chosen one, uniting two bloodlines to claim the gift of their god, destined to end a future war. No one wants war. No one wants their child to bear this burden. No one knows if the time is right. Precisely why they can't be together.

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THE GODDESS IN THE MACHINE

An elemental goddess and a female android team up to fight Shadow Gods from beyond reality.

Lornan is a gynoid, a sentient machine, thrust into war alongside Dorya, a fire & wind goddess way in over her head, desperate to prove herself.

Character art of the two protagonists of Ocean's Blood in black and white, plus the cover and a 5 star review

Welcome, new followers! Glad to have u! ❤️
I'm Thelma & I write dark, queer fantasy. Ocean's Blood, my debut, came out in Jan this year & I'm now eagerly working on book 2!

⚔️real enemies-2-idiots
❤️‍🔥slowest of slow burns
🦹‍♂️endearing villain
🤺clash of egos
🩸demons, blood, swords

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DESPERATE DESTINY
⚔️ Epic fantasy trilogy
💑 I'm terrified of you --> I love you
💀 War
🤕 Amnesia
👨‍🏫 Mentor POV
🔮 Chosen one (who's quest is derailed)
🍀 Healers

The Dark Crystal x Oathbringer

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Edge of Eden mood board: A woman waking up in some kind of pod A small ship high in orbit (oblivion) A large orbital platform above a gas giant (beyond the Aquila rift) A vast futuristic cityscape (the creator) A clean control center with a woman (oblivion) An advanced astronaut (interstellar) A large forum (Star Wars)

EDGE OF EDEN
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Resurrected on the artificial moon of Eden, Malcolm Gray is the key to political upheaval threatening to tear the galaxy apart. He must embrace this strange future or become a pawn in its undoing.

A MEMORY CALLED EMPIRE X PROJECT HAIL MARY

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Thanks! I really enjoyed playing with the morally grey AI characters in this one.

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When a spacecraft crashes on a planet with a poisoned atmosphere, Thea and her team have ten days to find it before it's too late for possible survivors. It should be an easy mission, but the monsters she faces are not all from her planet's ecosystem.
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Text next to an image of dragon gargoyles reaching out from a cathedral steeple- Rooted in Stone YA Urban Fantasy 100k words

Words written over a dark black background with a crow motif- Rumors say that St. Romain’s is haunted. That suits lonely, troubled goth-girl Helena, perfectly fine. Right away she is fascinated by the eerie sculptures on the campus chapel. Wounded by past rejections, she is reluctant to open up to anyone. All she wants to do is fool her therapist long enough to not get kicked out of another school. When she develops a crush on the mysterious and beautiful Kia, Helena learns her secret… Kia is a gargoyle. The statues are not just stone, but powerful guardians of a rift between worlds. These uncanny guardians quickly find a friend in Helena, but she hides a dark power of her own. When war spills through the rift, the stones of their beloved chapel begin to crumble and Helena is drawn into the battle to protect the world. Trapped in a strange, technicolor netherworld, our goth-girl heroine must face the darkness within or risk the collapse of both worlds and the destruction of her newfound family of stone… and Kia with them

Text over a lightened turquoise scale and fin motif, like a mermaid’s tail- “Coral and Bone” by Tiffany Duane “Bleeding Violet” by Dia Reeves “Daughters of Smoke and Bone” by Laini Taylor “Don’t Let the Forest In” by CG Drews

Text over an image of the milky way above a quiet lake in the forest, a rowboat in the foreground- Tropes- Morally gray angels Darkness is not evil Found family Queer MC Themes- Explorations of power Mental health rep and self-discovery

All lonely and depressed Helena wants is to fool her therapist long enough to graduate. She never expected to fall in love with a gargoyle.

Then the stones begin to crumble, and war bubbles out of Hell. To save her new friends, she must make an unthinkable journey.

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A four picture collage. Top Left: a girl in a brown jacket and gray hoodie. You don’t see her eyes, just the nose down. Top Right: the words “Don’t Listen to the Static” Bottom Left: a hand grasping onto television static. Bottom Right: a girl wearing a headset, surrounded by computers in a blue room.

A four picture collage: Top Left: a man sitting cross legged, looking up. Top Right: three siblings holding each other tight. Bottom Left: the words “The World’s Not Safe Anymore” carved into a white door. Bottom Right: the quote: “If we don’t have each other, we don’t have anything.” By S.E. Hinton.

A four picture collage: Top Left: a man wearing glasses writing math equations on a see through clear white board. Top Right: the quote “we aren’t breaking you, we are fixing you.” Bottom Left: a selection of surgical tools laid out in front of a gloved man. Bottom Right: a needle piercing the skin of a person by a man wearing gloves.

A four picture collage: Top Left: a girl in a hospital gown running down a hospital corridor Top Right: the quote “your new life is going to cost you your old one.” Bottom Left: a girl attached to wires along her spine is watching a series of science fiction looking computer projections Bottom Right: a girl with her eyes closed, wires placed around her head, the image has a blue hue.

THE LAST TO LET GO x HELL FOLLOWED WITH US

🤐 A quiet teen
⚡ Glitching cities
📡 Post-explosion tech takeover
🧑‍🧒‍🧒 Sibling loyalty
🧬 An inventor’s twisted obsession
👁 A voice in her head, not her own
🕳️ If she breaks, she won’t just be consumed—she’ll be weaponized.

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The image shows a horror-comedy novel cover titled "DAD BODIES." The top of the cover reads "THE GAME JUST TOOK A DAD TURN" with "DAD" in a different color. The background features a haunted house with multiple towers and illuminated windows against a dark backdrop. At the center is a 20-sided die (D20) used in tabletop role-playing games like Dungeons & Dragons, with visible numbers including 1, 7, 13, and 19. The die is surrounded by red blood splatter effects. At the bottom of the cover are six men with expressions of terror and shock. One man is wearing a white shirt over his head. These men are the dads referenced in the title.

CABIN IN THE WOODS × JOHN DIES AT THE END × KNIVES OUT

When their detective friend is murdered during their annual gaming retreat, 5 dads must rely on years of #TTRPG experience—and puns—to solve the crime before they're all killed off like NPCs in a badly written campaign.

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