My first book reached 200k, so I split it into 2 books.
The new first book was 165k+, so I edited. Endless passes. I cut scenes, lines, words, adjusted structure, and got it to 116k.
When it's done, you'll see it clearer. Strip it then, a word at a time if necessary. And it will be better for it.
15.06.2025 02:47 โ ๐ 0 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
A toy Gamera (A giant fire-spewing turtle kaiju) standing on an open laptop wearing regular human glasses appearing to read an open document on the screen.
Gamera reader
#writingcommunity #writers #writersky
02.06.2025 00:51 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 1 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Thank you so much!
27.05.2025 16:48 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
I only seem able to write in coffee shops. My brain produces its own terrible noise so I can't think creatively until I turn on "the show" for it to observe and be distracted. Only while it's busy watching the world can I extract what I need from it.
26.05.2025 22:32 โ ๐ 2 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
Writing Tip:
This is your regularly scheduled reminder to back up your work! Donโt put it off! Save it! Keep it in more than one location. Youโll thank yourself later if your computer suddenly goes up in flames or you lose that one thumb drive you have. Back it up!
#writing #writingtips #Booksky
24.05.2025 11:59 โ ๐ 8 ๐ 2 ๐ฌ 2 ๐ 0
Royal would be proud
07.02.2025 15:24 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
Authors, if you see this, it's a sign to post the first line of your book.
"โNeath starlight pricks over the American southwest, on a map-stain barkers call the chili capital of the world, five damp twenty-dollar bills changed hands in a urine-rusted trailer bar bathroom stall."
01.02.2025 21:51 โ ๐ 5 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 2
DEAR AUTHORS,
DO.
NOT.
TRUST.
AUTO.
SAVE.
Signed,
Management
๐๐ โ๏ธ #indie
#writersky #writingcommunity
28.01.2025 14:10 โ ๐ 6 ๐ 3 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
Baby seal plushie face with the words "Edit book three" along the top in red all caps, and "It Matters To me" at the bottom in red all caps.
26.01.2025 16:47 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Many of you dudes have asked for recommendations of women to follow for reviews. Hereโs six I read religiously.
@priscillapage.bsky.social
@bjcolangelo.bsky.social
@horrornonna.com
@horrorgirlprobs.bsky.social
@horrorella.bsky.social
@thehorrorchick.bsky.social
@redheadfrommars.bsky.social
24.01.2025 20:37 โ ๐ 414 ๐ 107 ๐ฌ 24 ๐ 11
"Legos and darkness" is now my "thoughts and prayers" for bad people like Devin.
Sending Legos and darkness Devin.
23.01.2025 16:54 โ ๐ 2 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
#writingcommunity #amwriting #amediting #writesky
Recently read some lovely snippets here that prompted me to repeat this...
Please open your #wip and search "had"
Most things someone did do not need to be things they had done.
23.01.2025 03:31 โ ๐ 6 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
Unlike you, I get my news from a reliable source.
09.01.2025 01:29 โ ๐ 8 ๐ 2 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Why is every cat Donald Pleasence?
05.01.2025 20:23 โ ๐ 3 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Obi Wan Kenobi but with Steve the dog's face
03.01.2025 01:46 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
I do sometimes discover myself weeping for people unknowingly holding their breath.
01.01.2025 14:27 โ ๐ 3 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Group of people sitting around table touching glasses in a toast before a meal. The scene is from the end of the movie, "Don't Look Up."
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
01.01.2025 03:04 โ ๐ 7 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
#newyear2025
New year vibe is very much that last dinner scene in Don't Look Up.
01.01.2025 02:57 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Happy Birthday!
I hope everyone has the day off to celebrate properly.
28.12.2024 16:46 โ ๐ 2 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Lorne Michaels at every SNL member casting audition ever
27.12.2024 14:29 โ ๐ 7 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
The alien villain of the Avengers movies, Thanos, snapping his finger, but his head is replaced with that of Steve the dog
26.12.2024 19:36 โ ๐ 2 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
Washington crossing the Delaware painting but with Steve the dog's face superimposed on George Washington's face
23.12.2024 20:19 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
A man standing in dusty clothes and poncho and cowboy hat, but with a dog's face ("Steve" the dog from the original post) - It is Steve's face superimposed over Clint Eastwood's face from the movie, The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly
I also see this...
23.12.2024 13:14 โ ๐ 3 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
I've spent about 2.5 hours editing 'was' out of my manuscript. I'm currently about 110/282 pages through it, and I've already cut almost 150. This is a time-consuming step, but I know it makes it so much stronger, so I guess it's worth it.
20.12.2024 18:07 โ ๐ 4 ๐ 1 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
AARP published a list of how You can Be a 60-something Debut Novelist in 10 steps. ๐ I break down the ridiculousness of the timeline, and what they got right on my blog. Link in next post โคต๏ธ
#MondayBlogs #writingcommunity
16.12.2024 18:09 โ ๐ 19 ๐ 5 ๐ฌ 4 ๐ 1
Sometimes while picking up all the discarded frozen potatoes around the house each week, I fall
14.12.2024 13:36 โ ๐ 3 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 1 ๐ 0
What is a swarm, if not love droning?
13.12.2024 15:07 โ ๐ 1 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
The Remains of the Day
12.12.2024 21:40 โ ๐ 5 ๐ 0 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
I've used The Emotion Thesaurus when writing all my books. There are only so many times characters can nod, shake their heads, smile, and raise their eyebrows after all. #writing
12.12.2024 14:24 โ ๐ 6 ๐ 1 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
re: Writing is therapy
My brain is like a bloodthirsty deity.
Only when I started sacrificing fictional people to it did it stop trying to kill me (mostly).
#writingcommunity #writing #amwriting #amediting
11.12.2024 19:56 โ ๐ 15 ๐ 2 ๐ฌ 0 ๐ 0
Writer - editing the first draft of a psychological techno-thriller novel. Artist - painting realism with oils. Slowly learning guitar, mostly to play the songs I grew up with. IT nerd. Lifelong learner. Opinions and posts are my own.
Beta reader by day and aspiring novelist by night
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I'm just a girl with a literature degree and a passion for making the world more equitable ๐
Artist| Writer| Activist
A trans man who refuses to believe men can't be soft, vulnerable, receptive, & VENUTIAN. Dedicated to BEing present.
#plural #dissociative #traumainformed #safespace
36 - He/They - Polyamorous - Polytheistic Pagan - Queer
https://tap.bio/@theloveshack
A warning: Sometimes I wear tan suits.
If you're still with me, I hate MAGA and pray for the leader's painful demise.
I used to be a copywriter, but now I just write for fun, usually about politics, books, poker and tasty rock music.
No DMs, please.
Idek. I like bugs, books, and water.
I write unpublished novels.
Stretching is the most important thing I do. #ChronicIllness
Trying to learn how to relax.
Opal Honeyhoof in the wild.
Be Curious.
Writer and reader of horror, fantasy, spec fic, drama, humor... a little of everything.
๐ซAI WRITING CAN F OFF. PEOPLE, NOT ALGORITHMS. โ
Find some of my stories at winchesterfiction.com
Enjoy other things at nicolewinchester.substack.com
God called me.
It was an assdial.
Author of IN THE GARDEN OF MONSTERS, and bestselling food-laden novels, THE CHEF'S SECRET and FEAST OF SORROW. Next! THE HAPPINESS COLLECTOR (Dec. 2, 2025). Also, the HubSpot Academy #SocialMedia Professor. ๐Food Italy๐ Books
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Author, Game Designer, TTRPG player, Nerd, Father, Husband, Christian, lover of all things Shenanigan, Co-Creator of Carbyne Jungle & LokDown TTRPGs, Author of Sci-Fi Novel Construct, Believer in Nazi Punching, Guillotined my Twitter account for blue skies
๐ Bsc (Hons) Computer Game Technology โ๏ธ Indie Game Developer. ๐ญ Comic Artist/Writer. ๐ธ Guitar. ๐น Piano. ๐งโ๐ฆฝ Disabled. ๐ฆ Autistic. ๐ฎ Games.
MBA(MIS), USAF Veteran (2008 - 2014) ๐บ๐ฒ Husband, Father. I stand with ๐บ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐ฝ ๐ช๐บ ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ณ๏ธโ๐ ๐ณ๏ธโโง๏ธ
Games: RDR2, Ghost of Tsushima, The Witcher, Chrono Trigger
Shows: Nathan for You, The Simpsons, The Rehearsal, Conan
Ret. lawyer, USMC, grandpa, Great grandson of a KY slave Civil War vet. This is me with my three departed sisters, each was alive during the story life of my debut novel, โBe White With Me,โ about a striving middle-class Chicago family in crisis. #booksky
๐ฎ๐ช Writer of absurd fantasy & haunted satire. Gremlins, trousers, ghosts & pigeons, not always in that order. Quietly unravelling. #AuDHD
Fitness, books and cat rescue. Adopt, don't shop. NY sports fan. Retired paralegal. Well behaved women seldom make history.
๐๐
Chris Mosquera is the author of:
"DAMIAN GARCIA: PHD DRUG SMUGGLER." Book 1 and Book 2.
www.outskirtspress.com/damiangarcia
He is an abstract artist ๐จ and lives by the beach in Cape Canaveral, FL.
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Exploring the metaphysical realm through meditation, psychic defense, and astral projection. Dive into the cosmic mysteries with @AstralExpressions. Elevate your mind, protect your spirit, and journey beyond the stars."
Poet. Writer. Reader. Thinker. โ๏ธ๐