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Dawn Sands

@dawnllsands.bsky.social

18 || foyle young poet, richard iii enjoyer, aspiring english teacher. usually moving line breaks. find me on instagram @dawnllswriter + poetry here: https://linktr.ee/dawnllsands

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Jesus at the Gay Bar
He's here in the midst of it - 
right at the centre of the dance floor, 
robes hitched up to His knees 
to make it easy to spin.

At some point in the evening
a boy will touch the hem of His robe 
and beg to be healed, 
beg to be anything other than this;

and He will reach His arms out, 
sweat-damp, and weary from dance.
He'll cup this boy's face in His hand 
and say,

my beautiful child
there is nothing in this heart of yours 
that ever needs to be healed.

Jesus at the Gay Bar He's here in the midst of it - right at the centre of the dance floor, robes hitched up to His knees to make it easy to spin. At some point in the evening a boy will touch the hem of His robe and beg to be healed, beg to be anything other than this; and He will reach His arms out, sweat-damp, and weary from dance. He'll cup this boy's face in His hand and say, my beautiful child there is nothing in this heart of yours that ever needs to be healed.

Okay so this one always makes me cry.

Thank you @jayhulmepoet.bsky.social

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and other poems never miss!

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VERMEER

So long as that woman from the Rijksmuseum 
in painted quiet and concentration 
keeps pouring milk day after day 
from the pitcher to the bowl 
the World hasn't earned 
the world's end.

VERMEER So long as that woman from the Rijksmuseum in painted quiet and concentration keeps pouring milk day after day from the pitcher to the bowl the World hasn't earned the world's end.

wislawa szymborska, tr. clare cavanagh #smallpoemsunday

19.01.2025 20:02 β€” πŸ‘ 56    πŸ” 11    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

#poetrysky any presses that publish very short pamphlets/poem series? like 10 poems or less?

19.01.2025 13:53 β€” πŸ‘ 3    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I am sure seagulls are directly descended from pterodactyls

18.01.2025 13:16 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

i want to fold myself into a poem curl up and stay there forever is this possible

17.01.2025 20:24 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I dreamed someone I had thought was a millionaire despite claiming poverty had written a poetry collection called β€˜The Metaphorical Swimming Pool’, but I broke into their house, and they had a real one.

I got in it and kept yelling β€˜it isn’t a metaphor if I can get wet inside it!’ down the phone.

11.01.2025 09:56 β€” πŸ‘ 99    πŸ” 7    πŸ’¬ 6    πŸ“Œ 1

my bluesky feed is just full of people posting about poems & poets they love and it is wonderful

11.01.2025 16:04 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

I loved Eleanor among the Saints - definitely deserving of a place on such a wonderful shortlist!!

10.01.2025 18:59 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0
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❛ Every time scientists go into the midnight zone / they find a new species. My son is telling me this / as he picks at his hands as if they are locks to release.

David Stavanger's 'Octonaut', from the #MothArchives – Issue 36. πŸ™

05.01.2025 19:33 β€” πŸ‘ 11    πŸ” 7    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 2
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reading round-up 2024! a few days late but filling in 366 tiny boxes takes TIME

04.01.2025 16:26 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

fun fact: the traitors uncloaked episode for the series 2 final received more viewers than the documentary about discovering richard iii's body

speaking of which claudia winkleman has the same hair as richard iii kind of

04.01.2025 00:38 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0
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today's writing spot:

30.12.2024 20:43 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

in the mood to rashly submit to mags i have no chance with

29.12.2024 00:46 β€” πŸ‘ 3    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Ooh this is such a fun question!! Probably Cloud Cuckoo Land by Anthony Doerr... old manuscripts + multiple timelines + art connecting humanity + "we are always at the point of believing we are nearing the end of human civilisation but we never actually are"

27.12.2024 18:09 β€” πŸ‘ 9    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

26 pages in to The Gospel of Eve by @revrachelmann.bsky.social and already 2 margery kempe references, this is wonderful

25.12.2024 12:16 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0
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my poem 'Dialogue on Survival', just published in the Solstice Young Writers Anthology 2024 by @writingeastmidlands.com πŸ’š

21.12.2024 12:00 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

the end of hedda gabler is literally yellowface by rf kuang

18.12.2024 14:26 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Does anyone know of any (preferably UK-based) lit mags that would be likely to accept a poem with a very misfit premise?? I have a poem about Antony Sher's Richard III playing the cello and it keeps being rejected and I would like it to find a home amongst other bizarre little nerd poems if possible

18.12.2024 00:54 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

as calvino would say, "seek and learn to recognise who and what, in the midst of the inferno, are not inferno, and make them endure, give them space." also 'this is today's conflagration' is a beautiful phrase I will be using

17.12.2024 19:09 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

i love @andotherpoems.bsky.social season!! they really never miss

16.12.2024 15:59 β€” πŸ‘ 2    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

owen sheers writes similes like a year 9 am I allowed to say that

15.12.2024 21:27 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

i am turning 18 in two days and as the girl who cried herself to sleep aged 10 because she convinced herself her childhood was over, this is proving an interesting poetic experiment

14.12.2024 23:45 β€” πŸ‘ 0    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

Calm and Collected Poems

14.12.2024 16:03 β€” πŸ‘ 34    πŸ” 7    πŸ’¬ 2    πŸ“Œ 0

I actually love poetry so much and I do not think I will ever be able to articulate this in the way that I want to

it just feels like a necessity you know??? like a staple part of life in which the whole purpose is to just experience something beautiful?? for sanity's sake?? am i going insane here

13.12.2024 23:46 β€” πŸ‘ 5    πŸ” 1    πŸ’¬ 1    πŸ“Œ 0

this is also me begging mansfield college oxford to let me in please i KNOW aestheticism used archaic language to create a rich linguistic texture and reinforce ideas of the inherent beauty of art!!! i won't call it restoration era again let me in please

06.12.2024 20:10 β€” πŸ‘ 1    πŸ” 0    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 0

pro tip: 5 practice oxford interviews in 3 days is not a good lifestyle choice

(pro tip 2: just because a poem has thee and thou etc does not mean it is 17th century, a trap i unfortunately fell into in one of said interview practices today)

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One year ago today Israel murdered poet Refaat Alareer along with his entire family.

06.12.2024 11:50 β€” πŸ‘ 42    πŸ” 22    πŸ’¬ 0    πŸ“Œ 1

the dark is rising!!! an absolute favourite

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