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I love that dynamic!! the mix of talent and uncertainty feels really alive and the mentor’s concern adds great depth too

does their relationship stay mentor-student or start to feel more like family later on??

That makes sense!! how do you plan to bring more of that in next draft?

That’s interesting!! but you mentioned appearance isn’t very important to character
I’m curious why is that?

That’s so sweet!! seeing them reflect on the past while watching their son’s life unfold sounds really moving! does the story often explore generational themes like that?

sounds like you’ve already got a clear idea of what to build on! do you think you’ll add that inner depth through their thoughts and feelings or more subtly through dialogue and interactions?

Oh that makes total sense!! giving the readers time to feel that bond first always hits harder later on! what’s the mentor-student dynamic like between them?

That’s such a cool approach! I love that you center real historical women!! do you have a favorite among the ones you’ve written so far?

Aww I love stories that circle back to family and memory!! what kind of tone does the scene have??

Haha wow you’re really crushing it!! even if the wordcount’s doing its own thing lol

do you usually try to stick to your plan or just let the story take the lead once you’re in the flow?

That totally makes sense!! coming from poetry it’s natural to lean into language first! your prose probably already has a great rhythm I'm sure

what kind of changes are you thinking of making for the characters?

that's awesome!! hitting that big turning point and knowing it works.. do you already have a sense of what parts you’ll tweak in revision or are you waiting to see how it all looks once the draft’s done?

Ahh that sounds so frustrating! screen issues and a rewrite? You deserve a medal for powering through that!

I’m curious tho what made you decide to keep the mentor alive? did the story just feel better with them still around??

Haha I can imagine! do you usually pick the era first and build the story around it or let the characters lead you to the right time period?
also, just curious who’s the main character and what’s he like?

Ooh I love that combo!! do you lean more toward political intrigue or more adventure-style mysteries in your worlds??

does he feel any better afterward or just ends up more frustrated once it sinks in?

that sounds incredible!! do you already have favorite eras or figures you’re most excited to explore in the next books?

Oh how’s the rewrite going so far? are you finding the new structure easier to work with or still experimenting a bit?

fair enough! do they share any similar lore or themes?

Oh cool concept!! is your MC directly affected by that imbalance or more involved in trying to expose or fight against it?

They sound like such a fun mix of personalities! Thane’s story especially has me curious like what’s his backstory? and how do the others look? have you shared anything about the Hellcats’ appearances before? I’d love to see^^

oh nice! sounds like a great mix! what kind of characters are they? could you tell me a bit about their personalities or genders? I’m curious how they balance each other^^

You guys liked the chibi version better so here it is!!
Honestly… I think the colored one might be the winner
Should I make this my official #twitch look??

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Wow that does sound like a challenge! managing such a big ensemble can be tough btw which character is the main focus of the story?

That’s such a beautiful inspiration!! I love that real history helped shape your story!

will there be parallels to those real events or more symbolic?

fair enough! rooting for you! you’ve got this! are you planning to celebrate when you hit 50k or diving straight into edits after?

That’s such a perfect combo!! dark fantasy with a touch of horror always hits so well

does it focus more on the magic side of necromancy or the emotional cost of it?

Haha poor guy! that outburst feels so cathartic though!

I totally get that! rereading after posting always hits so differently! do you usually let them flow when you reach them?

LOL that’s awesome!! having a touch of humor in there always makes writing more fun! do you think you’ll ever cross the two worlds over someday or keep them totally separate?

11k for a confession and kiss?? that’s some dedication!!! I love it those kinds of scenes always deserve the extra space! was it more emotional or more chaotic to write?