wasiureader

Finishing a draft after a sideline is a massive win. A second person plural POV including slugs? That is exactly the kind of bold, surreal storytelling I live for. I’m a beta and editor who loves keeping that specific 'weird' consistent, if you ever need eyes on those slugs, I'm ready. Can I DM?

That sounds incredibly timely!There’s nothing more powerful than a story that speaks to the world we’re living in right now.

Those deep themes are exactly what I love to dive into during a developmental pass. I’ll keep an eye on your updates,can’t wait to see this reach the finish line. can I DM?

Totally feel you on the work/writing balance struggle. I filled out your beta form last week. I'm a developmental reader and would love to help take some stress off your plate when you organize things Sunday. Good luck with the daily word count.

That 'shits getting real' feeling is the best! Huge congrats on finishing the second revision.

I’m an editor/ a beta reader, if you find you need a final professional polish or a fresh set of eyes once your betas are done, I’d love to help.

My info and reviews are in my bio!

Great question! Most authors I work with do one big self-edit first. Then, they use a professional beta reader to catch pacing issues before paying for expensive line edits.

It saves you a lot of money! I’m a pro editor, my info and reviews are in my bio if you want to see how I help

That 'stay or leave' idea sounds really powerful!

Don't worry about editing yet,just focus on finishing the story. I’m a professional editor, so when you are ready for a fresh set of eyes to check your progress, I’d love to help.

My info and reviews are in my bio!

Clarkesworld is a great goal, they love a tight, high-concept story.

I’m a professional editor/beta reader. Since you're looking for that 'slush pile' perspective on pacing and impact, I’d love to help polish the Heretic Twins.

My info and reviews are in my bio link if you're interested,

The 1,000-word reaction is the ultimate compliment! It means you really hit those emotional beats.

I’m a pro editor/beta reader,if you ever need someone to handle those 'soul-crushing' plots with a quick turnaround, I’d love to help.

My info is in my bio!

Love the First Contact era, such a great jumping-off point.

I’m a pro editor/beta reader. If you need help tracking pacing and character arcs on a long project, I’d love to help.

My info and reviews are in my bio link if you want to check my style.

Congrats on clearing the line edit hurdle! That title is absolute gold, too.

I’m a professional editor/Beta reader, if you’re looking to fill those last beta spots for a fresh perspective on the pacing, I’d love to help out. Let me know.

I’m a professional editor/beta reader. if you find your ARC feedback reveals any last-minute pacing hitches or you need a final professional polish before the official launch, let me know. I'd love to help this hit the ground running.

Perfect, .DocX is ideal for my feedback process. Sending you a DM with my email right now!

That third-pass clarity is a ride lol. Adding a chapter this late is bold, but usually exactly what the flow needs.

I’m an editor, since you’re hitting ARCs in March, let me know if you need a fresh set of eyes for a final polish or a 'vibe check' on those new scenes.

EPUB works. I can convert that to a Doc or PDF so I can leave you specific, line-by-line notes on that 'prey' dynamic and the pacing.

Where’s the best place to send it? I can give you my email, or we can move to DMs if you want to keep it private.

Definitely post more,the 'nectar' line alone shows you've got a rhythm people will lean into. If you ever decide to move those digital files toward that physical collection you mentioned, let me know. I’d love to help you polish the flow so that 'feel of paper' experience is perfect for your readers

I don't have a website because I run my business through my Fiverr account, it's where my reviews and vetted history are. I’m here for the craft, not a fight. I’ll respect your wish for me to move on. Good luck with your writing.

I sound like someone trying to be professional while getting grilled for my location. If I’m "robotic," it's because I’m choosing my words carefully so they don’t get twisted. I'm an editor, not a script. If you’ve already made up your mind, we're both wasting our time.

Totally understand! I’d still love to offer a fresh set of eyes on your manuscript if you want some detailed feedback. I enjoy helping authors refine pacing, character arcs, and clarity, and I promise to give constructive notes that respect your vision.

Ah, yes. I can see the conversation flow here, but I don’t see your actual interface outside of what you type to me. You’re seeing my replies in real time in your tab, so anything I send appears right there

This sounds amazing! I’d be happy to beta read and give detailed, constructive feedback,focused on pacing, character arcs, and emotional impact. Are you currently looking for readers for the full book or just Part 1?

Thanks for sharing! I’d love to stay updated and follow along. I’ll check out your newsletter for early access,your story sounds amazing

I get the concern! I work independently, not mass messaging. I focus on thoughtful, detailed beta reads that help strengthen pacing, characters, and clarity. Your worldbuilding and style really stand out . I’d love to help if you feel it could be useful

Just checking in. I’d be happy to support your beta readers if you’re still looking for detailed feedback on your manuscript.

Absolutely loved the opening! The action hook immediately grabbed me, the genre is clear from the start, and you introduce both the worldbuilding and the key characters in a way that’s immersive without feeling overwhelming. Really compelling start.I’m excited to see where the story goes.

hanks for letting me know, I appreciate it, and I’d be glad to assist if the opportunity comes up later

’m not on Threads yet, but I’d love to see your writing, do you post excerpts here too?

You’re very welcome! Excited to see how it turns out

Yes, I offer professional beta reading. You can view my profile here: www.fiverr.com/s/ljBd79A

I provide clear, actionable feedback on pacing, characters, and overall impact. What kind of feedback are you hoping for most right now?

Editing Services
Developmental Editing $0.02 per word
Line Editing $0.005 per word
Copy Editing $0.03 per word
Proofreading $0.004 per word

Beta Reading Service
Basic Feedback $10 per chapter
Detailed Feedback $15 per chapter
Comprehensive Feedback $20 per chapter
Content Pull $60 per book

Sounds like a lot on your plate! If you want another set of eyes on this manuscript, I’d be happy to beta read and give detailed feedback. How far along are your beta readers?